Tobys Tale

There was harmony in the animal kingdom
All the animals got along
But there was one little meerkat called Toby
Whose behaviour was simply just wrong

Popping up here , popping up there
In places he did not belong
Being a know-all and causing trouble
Creating conflict and havoc …then he’d be gone

Toby appeared to enjoy trouble
Rubbing the other animals up the wrong way
With a irritating and mean attitude
Always needing to have the last say

One day Mother bear lovingly hugged Toby 
In a gentle kind loving voice asked Toby ‘ Why’
Why do you cause trouble and upset others on purpose?
Being so rude making them angry or cry

Tobys whole being softened , he began to weep
Telling Mother bear that right from the very start
He was lonely ,did not like himself, felt he didn’t belong
Those words melted Mother bears heart

She explained to Toby that we are all equal in the kingdom
No one better than another
That his mean behaviour was not exceptable
How badly he treated the sisters and brothers

Mother bear chatted in depth with Toby
Speaking straight from a mothers heart 
He needed to begin loving himself first ,she said
Thats where he needed to start

Toby had many long chats with Mother bear
Over time they become very close
Toby began to love and like himself
A happier future for himself he now chose

There was now harmony in the animal kingdom
They all got along
Including a Meerkat called Toby
Who now had friends and belonged!
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Date: 10/30/2024 8:30:00 AM
How sweet. What a wonderful lesson you have xplained to us through the lives of animals and how we should all pay attention to mother bears wise words. This is a melt my heart poem simply beautiful. Love and blessings Jen.
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Deb M
Date: 11/1/2024 1:44:00 PM
Jen your comment melted my heart also….thankyou so much my sweet sweet friend! Debx
Date: 10/29/2024 1:10:00 PM
Hi Deb, that was a beautiful story full of meaning, we could do with a mother bear to educate the human race lol.xx
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Deb M
Date: 11/1/2024 1:43:00 PM
Hehe….Mumma Bears should rule the world John! Thanks….Debx
Date: 10/29/2024 9:07:00 AM
Great that we should love and appreciate our pets. Cuddles.
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Deb M
Date: 11/1/2024 1:42:00 PM
Thanks Victor…Cuddles…Debx
Date: 10/29/2024 5:29:00 AM
Every kingdom needs a mother bear to extol the necessary trait of good behavior. Could be what a poetry site needs to show those little Toby's how to behave, but they'd have to learn to love themselves first. You're a great example of being a mother bear, Deb.
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/29/2024 7:25:00 AM
Hugs for you, Mama.
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Deb M
Date: 10/29/2024 6:08:00 AM
You are always so sweet to me Lin! Thankyou….Mother Bear!x
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