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Tobys Tale

There was harmony in the animal kingdom All the animals got along But there was one little meerkat called Toby Whose behaviour was simply just wrong Popping up here , popping up there In places he did not belong Being a know-all and causing trouble Creating conflict and havoc …then he’d be gone Toby appeared to enjoy trouble Rubbing the other animals up the wrong way With a irritating and mean attitude Always needing to have the last say One day Mother bear lovingly hugged Toby In a gentle kind loving voice asked Toby ‘ Why’ Why do you cause trouble and upset others on purpose? Being so rude making them angry or cry Tobys whole being softened , he began to weep Telling Mother bear that right from the very start He was lonely ,did not like himself, felt he didn’t belong Those words melted Mother bears heart She explained to Toby that we are all equal in the kingdom No one better than another That his mean behaviour was not exceptable How badly he treated the sisters and brothers Mother bear chatted in depth with Toby Speaking straight from a mothers heart He needed to begin loving himself first ,she said Thats where he needed to start Toby had many long chats with Mother bear Over time they become very close Toby began to love and like himself A happier future for himself he now chose There was now harmony in the animal kingdom They all got along Including a Meerkat called Toby Who now had friends and belonged!

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Date: 10/30/2024 8:30:00 AM
How sweet. What a wonderful lesson you have xplained to us through the lives of animals and how we should all pay attention to mother bears wise words. This is a melt my heart poem simply beautiful. Love and blessings Jen.
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Deb M
Date: 11/1/2024 1:44:00 PM
Jen your comment melted my heart also….thankyou so much my sweet sweet friend! Debx
Date: 10/29/2024 1:10:00 PM
Hi Deb, that was a beautiful story full of meaning, we could do with a mother bear to educate the human race lol.xx
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Deb M
Date: 11/1/2024 1:43:00 PM
Hehe….Mumma Bears should rule the world John! Thanks….Debx
Date: 10/29/2024 9:07:00 AM
Great that we should love and appreciate our pets. Cuddles.
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Deb M
Date: 11/1/2024 1:42:00 PM
Thanks Victor…Cuddles…Debx
Date: 10/29/2024 5:29:00 AM
Every kingdom needs a mother bear to extol the necessary trait of good behavior. Could be what a poetry site needs to show those little Toby's how to behave, but they'd have to learn to love themselves first. You're a great example of being a mother bear, Deb.
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/29/2024 7:25:00 AM
Hugs for you, Mama.
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Deb M
Date: 10/29/2024 6:08:00 AM
You are always so sweet to me Lin! Thankyou….Mother Bear!x

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