Get Your Premium Membership

The Unicorn

And there ...
I saw the unicorn, 
The sunlight beamed
Off her golden horn

She just stood there
By the edge of the brook,
Never startled ...
As I stopped to look

It was just her and I
While all time stopped,
Then, to the waters
Down her head dropped

To take a drink
Nibble at the grass,
I cannot tell you
How much time did pass

The unicorn saw me
For a moment midday,
I just turned around
And I walked away ...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/19/2024 5:53:00 AM
Dear Kelly, Your poem transports me to a magical realm where the ethereal beauty of the unicorn captivates the soul. I loved the imagery of the sunlight dancing off her golden horn, and her serene presence by the brook filled me with a sense of wonder and tranquility. Your words evoke a fleeting yet profound encounter, a moment suspended in time where the ordinary world fades away. It leaves me pondering the mysteries of existence and the fleeting nature of such enchanting moments. What a great, mesmerizing journey into the realm of fantasy. - Blessings, Daniel
Login to Reply
Date: 3/18/2024 1:37:00 PM
- Would like to see it... must be beautiful ... lovely poem, Kelly :) - hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 3/18/2024 1:05:00 PM
Too bad, it mighta been fun to hitch a ride ;)
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry