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The Rapture of Rot

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Written: August 02, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Crystol Woods *************** In the slipshod cradle beneath the apple tree, a bruised fruit folds ajar— molten sweet sapidity pooling through velvet skin. Eviscerated grace, they say, but I grasp the quiddity of life unmasked. A burnt sienna kiss of aurora— flesh undulating with fungal bloom, wispy gossamer threads that stitch the inevitable return to the earth. It is not ruined. It is a transformation: a diaphanous ballet between death and what dreams may grow. We ogle brightness, but rot is brighter still—iridescent with purpose, alabaster spores pirouetting as sylphlike specters on a sacred odyssey to placate the starving soil. It is seraphic. It is a panacea. It is quintessence made humble. Rapture lies in this ineffable nexus— decay whispers loud as a lullaby. The rakish grubs maunder through a velvet pyre of rind and memory, and the loquacious beetle sermonizes on endings as beginnings, as though time had a gullet And rot was its sweetest wine. Call it grotesque. Call it abhorrent. But beauty—true, ineffable beauty— wears many masks. And in these nebulous throes of perishing, I watch a face burnished by truth, smiling with roots in its eyes.

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Date: 8/3/2025 9:25:00 AM
I was touched by the steadfast, well grounded, gravitas of your words. Indelible metaphors, my dear Sotto Poet. Never have I read a poem like yours. I am beside myself! And like beautiful Rowena says, stunning. Favorite line is Call it abhorrent. But beauty—true, ineffable beauty— wears many masks.
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Date: 8/3/2025 7:18:00 AM
This is stunning—so vivid and layered. You’ve turned decay into something sacred and strangely beautiful. That last line hit me hard—'smiling with roots in its eyes' is pure brilliance.
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Date: 8/3/2025 3:22:00 AM
- On first read through it's easy to get overwhelmed... great metaphors and comparisons, love the ending Las :) - hugs
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Date: 8/2/2025 4:57:00 PM
absolutely one of the most powerful poems I've ever read. The last verse was like a crescendo...brilliantly done, Sotto! I think I shall always remember these lines: But beauty—true, ineffable beauty— wears many masks. I agree! Faving....have a pleasant weekend, hugs, Sara
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Date: 8/2/2025 2:43:00 PM
Breathtaking poem, Sotto. I am putting it in my favs. I read this more than once. You nailed this.
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