The old and new


Open farms where horses run
Back drop of mountains in the sky
Tears of joy are calling to cry
Released, from lessons, to have fun

Valleys filled, freedom to the brim
Driving the ledge, just to feel it
Peace wraps around me, where I sit
Tossing thoughts like a haircut trim

Some old ones, no longer welcome
Heavy weights, I choose to let go
The still life of mountains, I know
Stand by me and where I came from

Now just me, standing in the breeze
Saying hello to a warm day
A new life with new things to say
While the old melts, like winter freeze

Heidi Sands

4/22/25

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Date: 4/25/2025 10:28:00 AM
What a beautiful piece filled with the joyous imagery of nature! I love the serenity and simplicity of this. It's quite a piece of saudade. xxx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/26/2025 5:21:00 AM
Thank you very much Reya. :)
Date: 4/23/2025 6:05:00 AM
- Let the old melt like the snow on a sunny spring day... enjoy all the beauty, Heidi :) - hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/23/2025 1:46:00 PM
Exactly Anne-Lise. I am. Today has been beautiful. I am enjoying it very much. Thank you . Hugs
Date: 4/22/2025 6:20:00 PM
Just lovely Heidi. I can feel the beauty in the mountains and the serenity you find there. Love this one from you. Just back briefly until I go back to help my brother and his house. Wishing you a great week. Hugs...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/23/2025 1:45:00 PM
Thank you so much Michael. There is a lot of serenity here! I appreciate your kind comment. I hope it goes well at your brother's house :) hugs
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