Home » Poems » Aqua Marine » Take The Chance

Take The Chance

Take The Chance

Born by Chance with no choice
Except to Live -
Brings to Life the chance
To Choose to Live by Choice. 



Aqua Marine: Just Musing...
5th July 2024.

identityinspirationalintrospectionfree verse

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Marugu Mo

Date: 7/25/2024 2:25:00 PM

I like the contrast you make between our inevitability and our duty to make choices in this life's journey

Aqua Marine
Date: 9/15/2024 6:45:00 AM

I love that thought... It's our duty - yes, it is. Our hearts don't stop beating, our minds can continue learning from good decisions, and mistakes... With every breath we take... Thank you very much for your welcome comments! ((Warm Hugs!))

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/8/2024 3:19:00 AM

Wise words penned-To celebrate life and not exist.

Aqua Marine
Date: 9/15/2024 6:40:00 AM

Yes indeed!! Sometimes it's the little things that are familiar, and consistent... Like flowers being visited by bees, and simple birdsong that rises in early morning, that keep us going... By Choice... ((Love and Big Hugsxxxxx))

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/7/2024 8:22:00 AM

Makes one think, dear. Really good one. Yes... we didn't choose to be here, but we can choose to make the most of it. Thanks for your kind words on my page. Blessings

Aqua Marine
Date: 9/15/2024 6:35:00 AM

I am grateful for your kind and generous comments, Eileen... No matter the situation, we have the ability, and right to choose... Even if it's just determination to hold onto our integrity.... (Lots of love and Hugsxxx xxx)

Ink Empress

Date: 7/6/2024 11:40:00 PM

The chance To choose to live by choice, What brilliant wordplay there, so clever and creative and youv delivered something that is so deeply meaningful and although short has a philosophical touch to it too! Which makes this worthy of all the accolades. You should print this gem, and frame it, its beyond excellent! Fave it is for me! Pleasure reading you talented soul. Sending you always light

Aqua Marine
Date: 9/15/2024 6:31:00 AM

Thank you, Ink E, I really value your visit, and great suggestion to hang it up where I can see it on those "bad hair days..." (life happens..) And your sensitivity is much appreciated.. (Warm Hugs and Wonderful Day to You! Xxx)

Silent One

Date: 7/6/2024 8:56:00 AM

I agree with your sentiments..

Aqua Marine
Date: 7/6/2024 4:03:00 PM

Life is so precious... Thank you. ((Warm Hugs))

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/6/2024 1:30:00 AM

This is very true and pertinent. We have no say to be born, but once born no one has a right to terminate life. An intelligent poem.

Aqua Marine
Date: 7/6/2024 2:18:00 AM

Your visit and comment greatly valued, Victor! You write from the depths of your Mind Heart experience... You make me think deeply about life's meanings... We write our hearts out, because we have chosen to live our lives to the fullest extent possible... ((HUGS))

Tom Woody

Date: 7/5/2024 6:19:00 AM

Alot packed into this little bugger. Yes, no one has a say on coming into the world, but we all have a free will choice whether to stay. I for one choose to hang around

Aqua Marine
Date: 7/5/2024 6:26:00 AM

I will never allow myself to be a victim, by saying I didn't ask to be born... I choose to hang around for good too! :)

Take The Chance

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

Member Area

Soup Social

Member Poems

Member Poets

Famous Poems

Famous Poets

Poetry Resources