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strawberry autumn

plump red strawberries
the kind we knew last red dusk
when time inched by brusque

garnet stars flash on
scarlet leaves and cardinals
mars phenomenal

crimson dragonflies
when fruitful days are going
true colors showing

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/22/2024 6:33:00 AM

I am delighted to see your Haiku on the winners' list. Nicely descriptive winning lines penned. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/22/2024 4:18:00 PM

Your warm words of congratulations are deeply appreciated, Sara. Blessings.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2024 11:07:00 PM

I love all the play on red colors. Congrats

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/22/2024 4:19:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. Blessings.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/8/2024 1:21:00 PM

Evelyn, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku set.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/8/2024 9:11:00 PM

Dear Tania, you have my profound thanks for your warm words of congratulations. I always enjoy your contests very much.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/30/2024 12:10:00 AM

Oh my, I'm loving the raspberry rhapsody in these fruity lines that are truly enchanting and so mesmeric for my cherry heartbeats! Adore all these shades of red that you've painted in these words... So ethereal ~ "garnet stars flash on scarlet leaves and cardinals", " Crimson dragonflies " Ahh, such a stunning chain of haikus! I absolutely loved reading this.. Your words feel heavenly everytime and was a pleasure reading you after such a long time. Hope you have been doing well :) best wishes.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/30/2024 8:42:00 PM

Dear Hiya, it's so wonderful to have you back! I've missed your beautiful poems and your kind, sunny comments. Thank you so much for the great pleasure of this latest one. Blessings and hugs. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/26/2024 9:04:00 AM

You spectacularly manage hues. Pity the season for strawberries is over. Hugs.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/26/2024 10:17:00 AM

We haven't had the first frost yet, so we're sill getting the 'daybearer' variety of strawberries. Thank you for the wonderful compliment.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/25/2024 11:02:00 AM

Lovely so lovely! Love your use of colors in your own unique way. They come to life even without the pic!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/25/2024 10:09:00 PM

Thank you for the wonderful compliments. Heartfelt best wishes.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/25/2024 10:42:00 AM

Dear Evelyn, so full of color and I always loved a great Haiku and yours is no exception. Keeping Inking! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/25/2024 10:07:00 PM

I am glad you enjoyed this, Daniel. Deepest heartfelt thanks, for letting me know. Blessings and hugs.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/25/2024 10:40:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your three colorful Haiku writes. What a pretty picture. "Good Luck" Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/25/2024 10:04:00 PM

Your kind appreciation of both poem and picture, is very rewarding. Thank you so much. Kindest regards. :)

Maria Williams

Date: 9/25/2024 4:45:00 AM

Nice set of Haikus Evelyn. I particularly love the crimson dragon flys as I watch them coverting on our pool. Hugs Maria

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/25/2024 9:59:00 PM

Thank you very much for your lovely remarks, Maria. I find dragonflies fascinating, particularly their incredible flight capabilities. They can even fly backwards, or straight up, like a helicopter! Blessings. :)