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Stain, Statue and Concert

Reading a poem about a horse with a stain on the author’s page. Patron ate something saucy, as he read of a war statue, forking or spooning probably pasta or slurping poetry, precariously, I ponder, as I wait for the oven timer to deliver dinner. Deviled ham quiche - the aesthetic embodiment of eggs & cream, cheddar, onions & cayenne firmly held in its shell. I’ll eat in the early afternoon and get a lift to see Cheap Trick & Rod Stewart. Not the cheap seats, but the special ones saved for the limo driver’s guests; he will be chatting it up behind the stage or just standing by. I can’t get past a couple pages, having stopped at the blot. A library lie that these hard-covered words are all mine, well his; a-muse-d at a blank page, how I’ve filled its plate, and how I will separate my pie from my eye.

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Date: 8/3/2025 4:48:00 PM
loved the free flowing of your words here...most creative stream of conscious. A delight to read, hugs, Sara
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Date: 8/3/2025 12:51:00 PM
What a creative write you have here. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a fun day writing away..........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2025 1:17:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Paula! Have a nice Sunday!
Date: 8/3/2025 11:45:00 AM
Woah, Kim. This is like stream of consciousness. This is very natural poetry- all this from a stain on a page!! I hope your muse keeps going forever! LOL xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2025 1:18:00 PM
Aww…thank you!
Date: 8/3/2025 10:17:00 AM
- A great poem, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2025 11:16:00 AM
I appreciate you, dear Anne-Lise!
Date: 8/3/2025 7:22:00 AM
Interesting read! I love horses :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2025 11:17:00 AM
Thank you, Abdullah!
Date: 8/3/2025 7:00:00 AM
This is such a fun and clever mix of poetry, food, and real-life musings. I love how something as small as a stain sparked a whole layered stream of thought—witty, reflective, and surprisingly relatable!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2025 11:17:00 AM
Thank you, Rowena! Oh how I appreciate your comment!
Date: 8/3/2025 7:00:00 AM
So interest ng Kim! A little "slice" of life to contemplate and enjoy. It's refreshing to see unique subject matter and format! Love it! Happy Sunday!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2025 11:18:00 AM
I appreciate you, Mike! It is good to write both freely and sometimes constrained with form, syllables, etc… Hugs :)

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