Stain, Statue and Concert

Reading a poem about a horse
with a stain
on the author’s page. Patron

ate something saucy,
as he read of a war statue,
forking or spooning

probably pasta or slurping
poetry, precariously, I ponder,
as I wait for the oven timer

to deliver dinner.  Deviled
ham quiche - the aesthetic
embodiment of

eggs & cream, cheddar,
onions & cayenne
firmly held in its shell.

I’ll eat in the early afternoon
and get a lift
to see Cheap Trick &

Rod Stewart. Not the cheap
seats, but the special ones
saved for the limo driver’s guests;

he will be chatting it up
behind the stage or
just standing by.

I can’t get past a couple
pages, having stopped
at the blot. A library lie

that these hard-covered words
are all mine, well his;
a-muse-d at a blank page,

how I’ve filled its plate,
and how
I will separate
my pie from my eye.
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Buhagiar Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 8:43 AM
Your poem is truly inventive. Beautiful.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 1:41 PM
Thank you, Victor!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 4:48 PM
loved the free flowing of your words here...most creative stream of conscious. A delight to read, hugs, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 1:41 PM
Thank you somuch xx
Goldsmith Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 12:51 PM
What a creative write you have here. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a fun day writing away..........
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 1:17 PM
Thank you, sweet Paula! Have a nice Sunday!
Hind Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 11:45 AM
Woah, Kim. This is like stream of consciousness. This is very natural poetry- all this from a stain on a page!! I hope your muse keeps going forever! LOL xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 1:18 PM
Aww…thank you!
Andresen Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 10:17 AM
- A great poem, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 11:16 AM
I appreciate you, dear Anne-Lise!
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 7:22 AM
Interesting read! I love horses :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 11:17 AM
Thank you, Abdullah!
Gentile Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 7:00 AM
So interest ng Kim! A little "slice" of life to contemplate and enjoy. It's refreshing to see unique subject matter and format! Love it! Happy Sunday!!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 11:18 AM
I appreciate you, Mike! It is good to write both freely and sometimes constrained with form, syllables, etc… Hugs :)
Velasco Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 7:00 AM
This is such a fun and clever mix of poetry, food, and real-life musings. I love how something as small as a stain sparked a whole layered stream of thought—witty, reflective, and surprisingly relatable!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 11:17 AM
Thank you, Rowena! Oh how I appreciate your comment!
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