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Shadows Of The Valley

Shadows of the Valley creatures of the dark pitted dome scantily clad dryads' hissing drones they rally without souls—pod like, they roam throughout forests assiduously marled awoken from the darkest depth twigs and branches splayed and snarled shadows of the valley doyennes adept distracting sheaves as straws spewing dirt they bask in on battered brain gnaws Taken in is florescent energy of the soldiers asleep wondering lost deep in the woods a shadowy synergy offering oak caskets at any cost protecting their woodlands and wild and sacred groves the lakes are red the fireweed’s piled thickened blood broth nauseates the marshes are fed man’s liberation it confiscates deliverance emits rigmaroles confusion the mind like strobes swirling they detest the army’s intrusion Casting a shield of leaves they scatter to hide thorns on stems refining unsightly grey matter hybrid nymphs whittling femes on the verge of extinction, losing sight consuming the troops and extinguishing their light Set erect are the maiden’s free planted are the seeds of iron into the twisting gnarly shadowy tree chorus ~ Walk through its musky breath in the shadows of the valley of death they rape our land we strap their hands the now abandoned
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Date: 5/21/2025 3:50:00 PM
This is going to stay with me and haunt me. Reminds me of a poem I wrote in highschool "Silence Of The Trees"- but at the end, the trees were no longer silent. And trees are special-
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/27/2025 3:39:00 AM
Ty, Paige!
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Date: 5/27/2025 3:38:00 AM
I'll checki it out!
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Paige Hind
Date: 5/21/2025 4:41:00 PM
Hey, look at "Stolen Nights"- I explained what inspired me to write it for you. <3
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