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May 22, 2025      12.04pm 

Lady riding scooter hi-res stock photography and images - Alamy

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Date: 5/30/2025 11:21:00 PM
YOUR CHOICE k Contest Judged: 5/22/2025 1:38:00 AM Sponsored by: Brian Strand Place 1 ( 1-10 and HM multi-w)
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Date: 5/25/2025 1:18:00 PM
So clever, my friend! A showcase of your creativity and artistry. This is a joyful celebration of this mode of transportation in a spirit of delight and fun! Congrats and high fives for your win! Sending blessings dear Len!
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/30/2025 11:18:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging words and your warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Sam. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs
Date: 5/23/2025 8:30:00 AM
your shape poems never fail to astound me with their creativity, Len. Beautifully crafted shape, and the rhymes! love them <3
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/30/2025 11:17:00 PM
Belated thank you for reading my poem and your encouraging comments my dear poet friend Vanya. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs
Date: 5/22/2025 10:46:00 PM
ohhh my...i can't do this kind of stuff even if i paint or sketch in real life...best of cheers on your top win, sis! ...ride on!
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/25/2025 8:09:00 AM
Oh, you can do better than this sis, you're an artist and a very talented poet. Thanks a lot for reading my poem and for cheering me. I'm glad our dear poet Brian approved this rush poem/idea. Sorry for late coming coz I did a general cleaning for 2 days coz ants have already invaded my room.
Date: 5/22/2025 12:58:00 PM
- Lovely and creative poem, Len :) - Well done - hugs
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/25/2025 8:06:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend Anne-lise. God bless you always and your superb poetic talent. Hugs
Date: 5/22/2025 10:24:00 AM
Cute! Took a bit to create this ride, I think :)
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/25/2025 7:45:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my shape poem my dear poet friend Kim. No, just few minutes only coz it's very short dear. Thanks a lot again.
Date: 5/22/2025 10:12:00 AM
WOW!!! What a creative/fun write you have here. Love the shape-picture. "Good Luck" Hugs... Have a fun day writing away..........
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/25/2025 7:44:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem my dear poet friend Paula, for your encouraging comment and good luck charm. Because of your best wishes, I won. Thanks a million. God bless you always. Hugs
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