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May 22, 2025      12.04pm 

Lady riding scooter hi-res stock photography and images - Alamy

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Gasun Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 11:21 PM
YOUR CHOICE k Contest Judged: 5/22/2025 1:38:00 AM Sponsored by: Brian Strand Place 1 ( 1-10 and HM multi-w)
Kauffman Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 1:18 PM
So clever, my friend! A showcase of your creativity and artistry. This is a joyful celebration of this mode of transportation in a spirit of delight and fun! Congrats and high fives for your win! Sending blessings dear Len!
Gasun Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 11:18 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging words and your warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Sam. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs
Evangeline Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 8:30 AM
your shape poems never fail to astound me with their creativity, Len. Beautifully crafted shape, and the rhymes! love them <3
Gasun Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 11:17 PM
Belated thank you for reading my poem and your encouraging comments my dear poet friend Vanya. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs
Onclaud Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 10:46 PM
ohhh my...i can't do this kind of stuff even if i paint or sketch in real life...best of cheers on your top win, sis! ...ride on!
Gasun Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 8:09 AM
Oh, you can do better than this sis, you're an artist and a very talented poet. Thanks a lot for reading my poem and for cheering me. I'm glad our dear poet Brian approved this rush poem/idea. Sorry for late coming coz I did a general cleaning for 2 days coz ants have already invaded my room.
Andresen Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 12:58 PM
- Lovely and creative poem, Len :) - Well done - hugs
Gasun Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 8:06 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend Anne-lise. God bless you always and your superb poetic talent. Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 10:24 AM
Cute! Took a bit to create this ride, I think :)
Gasun Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 7:45 AM
Thank you so much for reading my shape poem my dear poet friend Kim. No, just few minutes only coz it's very short dear. Thanks a lot again.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 10:12 AM
WOW!!! What a creative/fun write you have here. Love the shape-picture. "Good Luck" Hugs... Have a fun day writing away..........
Gasun Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 7:44 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem my dear poet friend Paula, for your encouraging comment and good luck charm. Because of your best wishes, I won. Thanks a million. God bless you always. Hugs
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