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Sadness Befriends Me

sadness befriends me for life after a friend quits all feelings for me

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Paige Hind

Date: 4/21/2025 8:56:00 PM

Deep, and very personal

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2025 4:09:00 AM

Ohhhh!! So sad. I hope there can be a reuniting. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/7/2025 1:35:00 AM

You have a tender heart. I am more stoic.

Valsa George

Date: 4/6/2025 9:37:00 PM

Beautiful monoku.... dear Cay. This is how each one of us feel when we lose a friend, either through misunderstanding or deliberate choice. All the best, dear.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/5/2025 9:35:00 PM

A friend's abandonment sure is a punch to the gut... That said, there's a time to leave; a time to grieve; and a time to believe -- that you can rally. Go, girl! ~ gw

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2025 10:26:00 PM

The contrast of sadness with befriends me is very clever!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/3/2025 12:44:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your "Feelings" Monoku write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away..................

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/3/2025 9:15:00 PM

I'll check yours out in the morning, its late. I look forward to it and thank you for bringing yourself over to my place ... CayCay

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/3/2025 11:16:00 AM

Cay Cay, the three are high on my list for rifling through my feelings. Great entry! ~gl poetess

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/3/2025 9:14:00 PM

One, at least this one, could write a book about what makes them feel; 17 syllable summation is a 'fun' challenge. Always good to see you ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2025 10:59:00 AM

Very nice thoughts, Caycay. Did you use one of the two prompts? I am not sure, but you need to write the number of the prompt. I am going to write it out as well.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/3/2025 9:12:00 PM

THANK you, honey. I CONSTANTLY mess up the directions - need you! Contest is closed so, hopefully, mine wasn't immediately discarded and following the directions, even late, will matter. Have been home for about 2 hours. All is well ... CayCay

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/3/2025 9:22:00 AM

CayCay, a very astute observation. Our thoughts and experiences all have the potential to create feelings. It's really quite a gift that we have them....provided we don't let them take over completely!! I find that if we have a balanced life, they are messengers and suggesters that help us consider how to react. Smiles!!

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/3/2025 9:16:00 PM

"Balance" - that's the goal, isn't it? Thank you for your comments, I do appreciate your presence on Soup and on my pages. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

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