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Sara Jama's Draconian State Contest ~ ~ September 2, 2025

Reprobate of a Draconian State


There's tyranny taking place in the United States.
Fear of it becoming a Draconian State is not just a threat.
It's reality, thanks to the presidential powermonger
whose hunger and thirst for rulership are evident
in the hypocrisy that runs rampant in him. 
It's a disgrace to the office that the idiocy 
of one manipulative, mendacious man,
one dysfunctional dictator, a fabricator of falsehoods
has created a maelstrom of mayhem in what used to be
a free nation that upheld the laws of Democracy.

He should be despised and chastised as the tyrant, 
the usurper king who rants and rages when he hears
what contradicts or disagrees with his irrational ire.
It's bizarre perdition that he uses to stifle and smother
us as he tries to lock us inside a Draconian cage.

Not fit to be a leader, this diabolical sinner
waves his scepter while sycophants do his bidding.
What he's made of America is not something great,
but a country in which hate fumes and festers.
He stabs with the pen and we're bleeding out.
He's created a pestilence that's weakened the land
that he is swore he would make great again. 
A second election won, reveals the reflection
of what America is becoming... a woebegone loser.
Land of the free has been undermined, disparaged 
and denigrated by a toxic president who's poisoned
the minds of many citizens into believing
his bloated bureaucratic rhetoric. It's sick!

Are our hands cuffed by him when he pouts and huffs,
and when anyone dares to speak out against him? 
Do Americans have to turn away instead of having a say,
and have we lost the right to pursue happiness?
Is our liberty no longer worth the fight?   
The greedy hand of a dictator put a light to the fuse 
that ignited a nation that burns in chaotic crisis.

Callous and cold is the vengeful mind 
of the one who seeks to be omnipotent, an oligarch.
Brutal and barbaric is this appalling abuser, 
hell bent on malevolence seen in his bloodshot eyes.
Ironic that he, who's taken a mighty nation
and turned it upside down with civil unrest,
thinks he deserves the Nobel Prize for peace. 

The villain rules what was the home of the brave, 
making slaves of those who bend to his will.
Scrawling his name across endless pages of
executive orders to overthrow orders of judges.
The villain looms over America like the gloom
of a storm cloud when we should be shouting,
in voices loud, "Condemnation to the conniving one
who is toppling our country! Castigation to the evil one,
the thief who's brought a country so much grief, 
the usurper king at the helm who has defiled America!"
He's earned the epithet, 'Dictator of a Draconian realm.'
It's a title only a narcissist would declare 'vainglorious.'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 9/2/2025 1:25:00 PM
Lin, a great poem and so true. Our Country is in jeopardy under Trump. I am not seeing the promises he made come into fruition yet and don't believe they will.
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/2/2025 2:50:00 PM
He probably couldn't say what he promised, but I'd bet he knew when he made them that he had no intention of keeping any of them... that is if his feeble mind remembers them. And he mocked Biden for senility. Thanks, Tania.
Date: 9/2/2025 12:56:00 PM
Lin - this is a brilliant summation of what is going on in our country, but I don't see it changing anytime soon. My husband says we need a revolution, but so many people are intimidated by our dictator-in-chief that most are afraid of speaking up at all, much less joining a revolt. Your poem tells it like it is in a powerful way...
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Date: 9/2/2025 2:49:00 PM
Who knows what things haven't been made know. Thanks for reading me, Ilene. It was not a fun write.
Date: 9/2/2025 11:50:00 AM
Bravo Lin!! You certainly don't mince your words when you write about this dick tator! It's said "absolute power corrupts" so I predict he will pardon Ghislaine Maxwell so his sordid secrets regarding his 'friendship' with Jeffrey Epstein will never see the light of day - lets see if Mystic jan is correct. hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/2/2025 12:46:00 PM
Only if they turn him into mincemeat. My grandmother used to say, "God doesn't like ugly," and his ugliness has caused too many problems and hardships. It's not too difficult to see that there's evidence, but for him to have been impeached twice and still sit behind the Resolute Desk... the bigger problem lies in something far greater than his dictatorship.
Date: 9/2/2025 10:44:00 AM
I bet many who believed his election speeches are having regrets now having voted him in. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/2/2025 10:51:00 AM
Could be, Tom but most of them will never admit it. If they still see any good in him... I'll let that thought hang there. Thanks, Tom.
Date: 9/2/2025 10:41:00 AM
Lin, if anything you are being too kind! lol!!! You have been consistently passionate and direct. Great job. We don’t need tyranny in our lives. This wins in my small universe! Smiles!!
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Date: 9/2/2025 10:50:00 AM
I could've written so much more but his words and actions have backed up my lines. There are those who don't share my opinion and they can write what they please. I'm not handcuffed, and no one has taken my pen. Thank you for your supportive comments, Duke.
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