Pure Imagination And Fantasy

There once lived a one eyed girl who had twenty twenty vision 
she used her imagination each time she turned on the television

One peeper would sleep while the other one looked and looked 
through a slit she did perceive each dream her mind had booked

Viewing the world from an angle of one hundred and fifty degrees 
her reverie was safely tucked inside an eye of healthful protease 

A whimsy girl that she was with a soul that always gave thanks 
in a dress of Eiffel Towers, one eye saw the other drew blanks 

Monocular hallucination, she'd often see things that weren't there 
and when she saw something she liked she'd pluck it out of the air 

Visualization of the highest order, fluid as the wild Pacific Ocean
creating pure fantasy with one eye open, as the other one slept.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 6/27/2025 11:53:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Yes, your picture was perfect for the poem. Have a blessed day with your win................
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Date: 6/25/2025 1:56:00 AM
Delightful! One eye, double minded, are we not all?! Well done. Where is photo taken...scenery looks so refreshing and picturesque? Beautiful little girl!
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Date: 6/25/2025 3:21:00 AM
I took her in google image I do not know the little girl, but she is adorable isn't she. Thanks for reading Joe
Date: 6/24/2025 1:28:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write with a great picture. Is she your granddaughter??? She is so cute dressed in the Eiffel Towers. "Good Luck" I so did this one. Have a fun day writing away..........
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Date: 6/25/2025 3:21:00 AM
Just a photo I took from photo image Paula, but she fits in perfectly with the poem :)
Date: 6/24/2025 10:29:00 AM
Nice poem on a beautiful girl.
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Date: 6/24/2025 12:09:00 PM
thankyou for dropping in Jay, hope your day is going well:)
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