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There once lived a one eyed girl who had twenty twenty vision she used her imagination each time she turned on the television One peeper would sleep while the other one looked and looked through a slit she did perceive each dream her mind had booked Viewing the world from an angle of one hundred and fifty degrees her reverie was safely tucked inside an eye of healthful protease A whimsy girl that she was with a soul that always gave thanks in a dress of Eiffel Towers, one eye saw the other drew blanks Monocular hallucination, she'd often see things that weren't there and when she saw something she liked she'd pluck it out of the air Visualization of the highest order, fluid as the wild Pacific Ocean creating pure fantasy with one eye open, as the other one slept.

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Date: 6/25/2025 1:56:00 AM
Delightful! One eye, double minded, are we not all?! Well done. Where is photo taken...scenery looks so refreshing and picturesque? Beautiful little girl!
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Date: 6/25/2025 3:21:00 AM
I took her in google image I do not know the little girl, but she is adorable isn't she. Thanks for reading Joe
Date: 6/24/2025 1:28:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write with a great picture. Is she your granddaughter??? She is so cute dressed in the Eiffel Towers. "Good Luck" I so did this one. Have a fun day writing away..........
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Date: 6/25/2025 3:21:00 AM
Just a photo I took from photo image Paula, but she fits in perfectly with the poem :)
Date: 6/24/2025 10:29:00 AM
Nice poem on a beautiful girl.
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Date: 6/24/2025 12:09:00 PM
thankyou for dropping in Jay, hope your day is going well:)

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