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Pretty Melancholy

Desolate, windswept trees are shivery,
when red and purple leaves are falling.
Ungathered cherries hang in reverie!
Desolate, windswept trees are shivery,
engaged in multihued, cool creativity.
Goodbye violet birds skyrocket, calling!
Desolate, windswept trees are shivery,
when red and purple leaves are falling.

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Gershon Wolf Date: 11/13/2024 9:26:00 PM 'Ungathered cherries hang in reverie' -- a memorable line of verse, Evelyn. Haunts me... in a nice way, though. ~ Gershon Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 11/14/2024 2:18:00 PM I'm thrilled, Gershon! Thank you for pausing to make my day. Blessings. :)

Hilda Greenhough Date: 10/26/2024 7:05:00 PM A beautiful poem written in the difficult triolet style. Your poem shows a fun, free rolling side of autumn. This is a treasure. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 10/27/2024 4:33:00 PM I deeply appreciate your thoughts, Hilda. I'm very gratified.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/26/2024 1:45:00 AM Love the cute imagery in your triolet. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 10/26/2024 6:36:00 PM Why thank you, Andrea. I'm so delighted.

Silent One Date: 10/24/2024 12:43:00 PM I can feel the melancholy in your words but also the beauty.. nice arrangement of words my friend.. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 10/24/2024 5:34:00 PM It's very nice to get such positive feedback. Thank you, Silent One.

Ink Empress Date: 10/24/2024 10:08:00 AM Dear evelyn, this is so lyrical and catchy too as always you have used colors and written a very descriptive poem, whichever form you do; you always write ones that gets readers to see what you are showing through words! Beautifully delivered! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always! Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 10/24/2024 5:27:00 PM Thank you so much for your kind thoughts, Ink Empress. Your words are such a thrill! Your comments always bring smiles. Many blessings.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/24/2024 9:20:00 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. What a pretty picture you have here. Have a blessed day................. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 10/24/2024 5:23:00 PM Your warm remarks about both picture and poem, delight me. Thank you very much, Paula. :)

Tom Woody Date: 10/24/2024 6:25:00 AM Great trio and I like the phrase, "Cool creativity." The photo is a good choice too; not embellished, not jaw dropping, something I might see outside my door. You could write anything Evelyn Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 10/24/2024 5:20:00 PM Why, thank you, Tom! Your thoughtful words and fine compliments are so much appreciated. :)