Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Triolet

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Pretty Melancholy

Desolate, windswept trees are shivery,
when red and purple leaves are falling.
Ungathered cherries hang in reverie!
Desolate, windswept trees are shivery,
engaged in multihued, cool creativity.
Goodbye violet birds skyrocket, calling!
Desolate, windswept trees are shivery,
when red and purple leaves are falling.

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Gershon Wolf November 13, 2024 at 9:26 PM 'Ungathered cherries hang in reverie' -- a memorable line of verse, Evelyn. Haunts me... in a nice way, though. ~ Gershon Evelyn Judy Buehler November 14, 2024 at 2:18 PM I'm thrilled, Gershon! Thank you for pausing to make my day. Blessings. :)

Hilda Greenhough October 26, 2024 at 7:05 PM A beautiful poem written in the difficult triolet style. Your poem shows a fun, free rolling side of autumn. This is a treasure. Evelyn Judy Buehler October 27, 2024 at 4:33 PM I deeply appreciate your thoughts, Hilda. I'm very gratified.

Andrea Dietrich October 26, 2024 at 1:45 AM Love the cute imagery in your triolet. Evelyn Judy Buehler October 26, 2024 at 6:36 PM Why thank you, Andrea. I'm so delighted.

Silent One October 24, 2024 at 12:43 PM I can feel the melancholy in your words but also the beauty.. nice arrangement of words my friend.. Evelyn Judy Buehler October 24, 2024 at 5:34 PM It's very nice to get such positive feedback. Thank you, Silent One.

Ink Empress October 24, 2024 at 10:08 AM Dear evelyn, this is so lyrical and catchy too as always you have used colors and written a very descriptive poem, whichever form you do; you always write ones that gets readers to see what you are showing through words! Beautifully delivered! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always! Evelyn Judy Buehler October 24, 2024 at 5:27 PM Thank you so much for your kind thoughts, Ink Empress. Your words are such a thrill! Your comments always bring smiles. Many blessings.

Paula Goldsmith October 24, 2024 at 9:20 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. What a pretty picture you have here. Have a blessed day................. Evelyn Judy Buehler October 24, 2024 at 5:23 PM Your warm remarks about both picture and poem, delight me. Thank you very much, Paula. :)