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Alpha Lines Contest

Potential Romance

SKEPTICAL THOUGHTS UNDERMINE VERBAL WARMTH
as offered aloud from masculine parted lips.
When brain doubts unexpectedly burst forth,
ensure same feminine brain shreds them to strips.

MOONLIT NIGHTS OBSERVE POTENTIALLY QUED 
magic often downward fracture and fall apart
when a man’s truth isn’t evidentially clued
to a willing and attentive sweetheart.

AMPLE BAFFLED COUPLES DECLINE EMBRACE
if one is not genuinely enthused.
When qualms clearly show on one’s face,
the other’s face soon appears confused.

ENTICING, FOXY GALS HARKEN INTEREST
and good-looking men embolden heartbeats
so that when neither is indifferent
romance may take a stroll down High Street.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 9/17/2025 8:35:00 AM
Congrats on your win CayCay, Very nicely penned
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/17/2025 11:06:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph, it's very kind of you to come by with congrats and to sponsor contests for everyone. I appreciate you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 9/17/2025 1:28:00 AM
Great win. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/16/2025 6:36:00 PM
And this one too that o already reviewed. Way to go with the win. I got caught up today on all the contests I intended to write for Feels good!
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Date: 8/30/2025 7:30:00 PM
You capture it really well! Should be a winner - I really enjoy your style.
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Date: 8/30/2025 3:23:00 PM
Different ingredients if you want to perfect flavor and taste for love's soup. I enjoyed reading your poem on the mystery of romance poem, CayCay. Thanks for sharing your unique voice through your fine poetry, my friend. Hugs, Bill p.s. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 8/29/2025 7:10:00 AM
This blew me away like a storm of emotions, especially getting to the chase. Not so much a lady scorned but a lady with wisdom knowing love and how its much more than first appearances and if it doesn't sink under the skin, watch out as the tide comes washing in.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/29/2025 7:25:00 AM
Good to see the face, meet the face, you give good face. I think you should read, "Soulmate Love". I embrace your comments, Ryan. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 8/28/2025 7:50:00 PM
You are writing lately like a therapist or marriage counselor! I can see how important love relationships are to you. Lookie there. We both used the would moonlit! Nice work. Did you do Silent Kiss yet?
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/29/2025 7:28:00 AM
I first read this last night. Tim and Kyle were both sitting near, both wanted to know what I was laughing about so I read your first two sentences to them. Of course, I reviewed all I'd recently posted for evidence & really didn't find anything. You've just been reading so many of mine. No, I haven't written for Silent Kiss. LOVE CayCay
Date: 8/28/2025 6:43:00 PM
Romance should always be on roller blades lol, smooth poem dear Cay ,:)
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/29/2025 7:29:00 AM
Hi, Sweetie, thanks for the visit and comments. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 8/28/2025 5:37:00 PM
fabulous contest entry...the flow seemed natural and not contrived. I agree with Evelyn, this poem is elegant. have a pleasant evening, Sara
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/29/2025 7:30:00 AM
Thank you, so much, Sara! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 8/28/2025 3:35:00 PM
Your romantic poem has elegance and charm, CayCay. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Blessings
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Date: 8/28/2025 8:40:00 AM
Wow, such a beautiful poem swings across love's tangled web of passion and mistrust. It depicts the subtle hues of desire and confusion, capturing the exquisite ballet of souls brought together, yet frequently apart,
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