Palimpsest of Love

Written: August 05, 2025, for contest Marathon Mile 3 Poetry Contest / Sponsor- Mark Toney *************** As it rises shakily, the aurora radiates, Shore gets battered by periwinkle waves. Scarce alabaster turns to an ebonized sheen. A sacred, somber, and katabatic sorrow. A mild ache dances around joyfully, As kindred souls merge in a forlorn embrace. And halcyon as paradisal opiate utopia It is as vast as the unclaimed love. Your skim was both ethereal and brief, It hinders my span of lethargic wandering. Chest pain at every peak: a fipple passion, Gossamer scenes that wish to last forever. We gamboled beneath auric heavens, Effusive murmurs in dulcet hush. Stringent crave twirled in tricky loops, A mental usufructuary, weak and eternal. The limb caresses a vulnerable, airy speck, An ambrosian ache in a weary world— Meticulous truths submerged in the deluge, A shredded hope, a shriveled flame. Love is a chimera—a ripple on a palimpsest. Crestfallen spume claws the coast calyx. Then resiles, bedraggled, into amorphous dusk. Amort embrace, undone, beshrewed by time. Now, balmily, you are my nepenthe, A calix once held—an ambivalent ache. And I, a desperate-looking romantic, Forever ephemeral, forever asunder.
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Date: 8/7/2025 10:08:00 PM
This is so haunting, so beautiful that it's precious. In my favs -
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Date: 8/6/2025 10:55:00 PM
Dear Sotto,your poem is pure atmosphere! I felt like I was drifting through a dream made of light, sorrow, and memory. So many lines stopped me in my tracks—"Love is a chimera" and "a desperate-looking romantic, forever ephemeral" really hit home. Deep, poetic, and beautifully layered....Hugs
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Date: 8/5/2025 4:41:00 PM
Your words paint such a passionate picture, and the imagery is engaging, my friend. Good luck in the marathon! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 8/5/2025 3:56:00 PM
your poem was filled with such emotional intensity that flowed beautifully. Despite the vocabulary, I found the read enjoyable and engaging at every turn. Your unique voice shines through in this one. Outstanding contest entry. Best wishes in that contest. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Date: 8/5/2025 10:26:00 AM
This is a poem of intense emotional layering—beautiful yet somber. It excels in lush imagery and poetic ambition. While its elevated language and complex metaphors may feel dense at times, they serve the mood: a profound, elegiac meditation on love, loss, and fragile beauty.
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Date: 8/5/2025 10:06:00 AM
Whoaaa! A complete smorgasbord of richly flavoured morsels - awesome! :) john
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