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Edward's This or That Contest Vol 35 ~ August 3, 2025

There is still human kindness in the world Offering help with wings of hope, unfurled No glowing golden halo encircles their head But they give courage to those facing dread Some have a graceful gift that lights a spark when others struggle, trying to escape the dark Our better angels have no trace of greed when despondent ones are filled with great need Often, our better angels are strangers who smile Or come to us in the innocence of a young child A compassionate soul puts a hand on yours or mine Someone with a tender heart, who is not Devine. From sympathetic eyes they see teardrops fall Sadly, some without empathy will be no help at all There's hope that we may be such an angel one day when someone's world has been colored in gray Our better angels put aside bigotry and hate Offering help when it's needed to compensate those in need of a friend or in a time of fear To be a helping angel, take time to lend an ear It takes a generous person with a kind heart who will never hesitate, their assistance to impart their shining light gleaming in the darkest mist Then, we know by a better angel we've been kissed

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Date: 8/3/2025 6:28:00 PM
Lin, it takes a kind heart like yours to recognize that there are many good people on this Earth. Isn't it strange that there are also others who are here only for themselves. They have no idea how much pleasure we can derive from being kind and generous toward others. Anyway, this makes me smile and I appreciate reading something that focuses on helping others. This write in itself is a helper!!! Cheers!!
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Date: 8/4/2025 6:54:00 AM
G'morning, Duke and thank you. It's all about having the right attitude about life and people. Putting others first is always the better choice. Thanks for your kind thoughts!
Date: 8/3/2025 12:47:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "Our Better Angels" write. Last week, I was blessed with not one but two angels dressed as a human. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away...........
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Date: 8/4/2025 6:53:00 AM
How wonderful for you, Paula! Thank you for sharing that and for your comments.
Date: 8/3/2025 7:17:00 AM
Yes! There are many lovely earth angles in the world, however, there are devils too ~ black hearts full of evil.
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Date: 8/3/2025 7:39:00 AM
That's a very sad truth, Abdullah. I turn away from the devil and he tries harder to provoke and tempt me, but I'm on to his evil and cruel game. I suppose it's like the gorilla in your writes... but not in the mist, more like in the midst of innocent ones. Thanks for your kind thoughts.
Date: 8/3/2025 7:09:00 AM
Now thats a poem and a half Lin….such a lovely peaceful flow and feel to it! I call these Angels…..Earth Angels! Debx
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Date: 8/3/2025 7:12:00 AM
That's exactly what they are, Deb. Thanks so very much for your thoughts that mirror my own. Hugs, sweet friend.

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