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Orbitress

                                           show us your brightside
                                        spare us farsided blackness~
                                              thyne kind    o                   
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Date: 5/26/2025 10:19:00 PM
Inspirational, truly!! <3 Another great haiku.
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Date: 5/26/2025 6:16:00 AM
YOU ARE HAVING FUN WITH THESE HAIKUS aren't you my friend? :) You are so good at them !!! The images you match with each one is almost as spectacular as your poems. Loved them all.
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Date: 5/23/2025 6:34:00 PM
Between 'thyne kind' and the dizzy orbitress, my tummy was tickled. Thou doth move me with thine equisite imagery, and I am humbled, fair one, that I was deemed worthy to partake of its essence. I had enjoyment here-ith (Now I'm laughing) ... CayCay
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/25/2025 2:15:00 PM
No, why stop we re just getting started :D
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/25/2025 12:11:00 AM
If I ever need a laugh fix, all I have to do is click on comment replies and read your words below until I come to 'checknzy.' It is adorably humorous. Sweetly partake of the night, dear lady, that ebony darkness be gentle upon your dreams (do we have to stop doing this?) CayCay
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/23/2025 6:49:00 PM
Ha ha, "Whilst Luna sleepeth, thou shunt beknownst me milady that thou hath cometh"...ha ha. Did I spell thyn wrong, i'll checknzy! Lol I find myself adding 'ress' to many subjects making them women! Silly me, love that we can joke around CC. xhugs
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