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Orbitress

                                           show us your brightside
                                        spare us farsided blackness~
                                              thyne kind    o                   
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Hind Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 10:19 PM
Inspirational, truly!! <3 Another great haiku.
Volumes Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 6:16 AM
YOU ARE HAVING FUN WITH THESE HAIKUS aren't you my friend? :) You are so good at them !!! The images you match with each one is almost as spectacular as your poems. Loved them all.
Godwin Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 6:34 PM
Between 'thyne kind' and the dizzy orbitress, my tummy was tickled. Thou doth move me with thine equisite imagery, and I am humbled, fair one, that I was deemed worthy to partake of its essence. I had enjoyment here-ith (Now I'm laughing) ... CayCay
Anaya Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 2:15 PM
No, why stop we re just getting started :D
Godwin Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 12:11 AM
If I ever need a laugh fix, all I have to do is click on comment replies and read your words below until I come to 'checknzy.' It is adorably humorous. Sweetly partake of the night, dear lady, that ebony darkness be gentle upon your dreams (do we have to stop doing this?) CayCay
Anaya Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 6:49 PM
Ha ha, "Whilst Luna sleepeth, thou shunt beknownst me milady that thou hath cometh"...ha ha. Did I spell thyn wrong, i'll checknzy! Lol I find myself adding 'ress' to many subjects making them women! Silly me, love that we can joke around CC. xhugs
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