Ode to Door County

You opened your heart for me
on a Friday evening
after I worked in Green Bay.
My friend who lived near
Milwaukee said you
were the best place
to be in Wisconsin,
the forests
and tourist shops
that lay between
the bay and Lake Michigan.
I glanced to my right and knew
the lake was there
the endless waters and sky
but as I was driving
to Sturgeon Bay
I looked to the clouds
I was calling out to you
to take me on a greater journey
somewhere beyond the stars.
As I turned to go downtown
a bow of a ship appeared
the frame yet to take shape.
I remembered my younger days
spent along the shores
of The Great Lakes.
Patrons at a tourist bar 
near the shipyard 
as the jukebox played
proclaimed your sons and daughters
built the iron vessels
with their study hands—
it was a way of life to them.
The bartender said
explorers and sailors
died in your waters
as I finished my drink.
Streetlights twinkled
as I said goodnight to you
and my tires sang as I drove.
When I turned off the radio
I heard a whisper
the sound of your voice
calling me back.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 12/21/2024 1:23:00 AM
Nostalgic memories of the places visited and the time spent on the shore of the lakes. I feel as if I have visited all these places. Lovely poem, dear Mike.
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Date: 12/4/2024 7:37:00 PM
Mike this was a great read. Once I started I couldn't stop reading excellent theme and story and how you ended it. You have to go back. Thanks for posting...
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Date: 12/3/2024 3:50:00 PM
What a beautiful vastness of water. Your poem brings the Great Lakes to life.
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Date: 12/3/2024 3:39:00 AM
Such a heartfelt and loving poem that got me hooked from the very first line to read more. The flow and descriptive nature of your poem is truly impressive! I especially loved the opening in this , and also how you’ve ended it. Gives an evocative touch: pleasure reading your work today. Sending you light always
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