Joseph May's Rondelet Contest...3 May 25 | checked with rhyme zone and hmanysyllables.com... envious - 3 syls nuptials - 2 syls
my dear, let's stroll barefoot ...we laugh 'midst jeweled night my dear, let's stroll... old stars envious. they cajole-- Maytime taps our feet, to delight tender the waves, nuptials in sight my dear, let's stroll... First Place
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