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Joseph May's Rondelet Contest...3 May 25 | checked with rhyme zone and hmanysyllables.com... envious - 3 syls nuptials - 2 syls

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Nuptials


my dear, let's stroll
barefoot ...we laugh 'midst jeweled night
my dear, let's stroll...
old stars envious.   they cajole--
Maytime taps our feet, to delight
tender the waves, nuptials in sight
my dear, let's stroll...


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Len Gasun

May 10, 2025 at 1:26 AM

I never doubt in one one of your fortes my dear poet friend and sis, Nette - best in romantic poems! So impressive as always! Sweetest Congrats on your well-deserved first place win! Hugs.,hugs Thanks for sharing! Blessings always. Btw, sorry. I wasn't able to catch up in your contest. It filled-up so quickly.

Unseeking Seeker

May 9, 2025 at 10:34 PM

Lovely, romantic write, Annette, masterfully penned as only you can ~ warmest congratulations on your win

Joseph May

May 9, 2025 at 3:06 PM

Lovely write Nette, Congrats on your win

Maria Williams

May 3, 2025 at 6:03 AM

Dear Nette,such a dreamy, romantic piece—softly glowing like moonlight on the sea. A lovely dance of love and nature. All the best in the contest...Hugs