Nuptials

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Joseph May's Rondelet Contest...3 May 25 | checked with rhyme zone and hmanysyllables.com... envious - 3 syls nuptials - 2 syls

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my dear, let's stroll barefoot ...we laugh 'midst jeweled night my dear, let's stroll... old stars envious. they cajole-- Maytime taps our feet, to delight tender the waves, nuptials in sight my dear, let's stroll...

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Maria Williams

Date: 5/3/2025 6:03:00 AM

Dear Nette,such a dreamy, romantic piece—softly glowing like moonlight on the sea. A lovely dance of love and nature. All the best in the contest...Hugs

Paige Hind

Date: 5/2/2025 2:30:00 PM

Lovely! Very romantic, I would want such a stroll with someone!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/2/2025 1:10:00 PM

Delightful!