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my need to hold you grows stronger

          

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Temptation - Sexy Piano

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My Need

- oh, to touch you -

                   circle around your melody
                 not once, but many many times

                  just to feel your fingers
                        laced inside of mine

                   i crave you

                      the brush of your lips,
                             the taste of your kiss,
                   the movement of your skin

                                    my need

                       . . to feel you this close
                     continues to grow




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 a passionate little scribble

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Lewis Raynes Date: 3/13/2020 8:08:00 AM Lips ... this poem had me there, great words Brandy Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/13/2020 9:24:00 PM Oh my!!! Thank you Lewis. :) I know, lips create a breathtaking mood. Indeed. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy

Running Wolves Date: 12/18/2019 12:24:00 PM You could melt a mountain of stone with your words... Oh my yes indeed.. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 12/18/2019 3:54:00 PM Soft sigh. Thank you. I enjoyed writing this playful and passionate little scribble. Your thoughts make me blush. :) Brandy

Funom Makama Date: 9/9/2019 10:18:00 AM This is a masterpiece. Your soul is palpable here, a great dish of lines my wonderful friend. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/9/2019 11:59:00 AM Thank you Funom. Such a sweet thing to say, about me and my poetry. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/24/2019 3:03:00 PM I enjoyed retreading this one and the playful reactions to your poem. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/24/2019 9:46:00 PM It seems some thoughts here in the comments are more playful than this poem. The mood lingers!! Thank you Rick. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit Date: 7/24/2019 7:29:00 AM You set Poetry Soup on fire with these sensuous words my friend, Brandy..passion in every breath! Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/24/2019 1:31:00 PM Oh my!!! Thank you Vijay. Just something a little playful and passionate touching the page. Your thoughts bring a smile and a blush at the same time. :) Brandy

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 7/21/2019 5:37:00 PM Hello Brandy Nicole, oh...I sense that you are in love. have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/21/2019 6:28:00 PM Darlene, love is an emotion that always surrounds my heart. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Brandy

Silent One Date: 7/14/2019 4:37:00 AM Damn, a real sensual and tender poem... you say only a little, but say so much... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/15/2019 7:27:00 AM Perhaps she will. Brandy Nicole Date: 7/14/2019 2:02:00 PM Thank you Silent One. Sometimes, less is more. Truth. :) Brandy

Joseph May Date: 7/13/2019 7:12:00 AM 'I love the melody of passion' in your words Brandy... Lovely write Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/13/2019 1:19:00 PM Yes, there is a sweet melody within. Thank you Joseph for your kind words. :) Brandy

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 7/13/2019 5:05:00 AM Tenderly romantic dear Brandy! Lucky the one who gets such attention! Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/13/2019 1:18:00 PM So kind of you to say. I am just me. Thank you Demetrios for your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Arturo Michael Date: 7/13/2019 12:08:00 AM I'd happily swim around my fish bowl...and blow bubbles while admiring you with all of my heart...if I was a little gold fishy you'd be the blessing of my eyes... hoping one day to love you...that's the kind of passion you'd enchant with these poetry nuggets... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/13/2019 1:16:00 PM Oh my!!! Such a playful comment. Thank you Arturo for reading this passionate scribble again and leaving your thoughts upon it. Your words bring a smile. :) Brandy

Edward Orozco Date: 7/12/2019 2:52:00 PM Beautiful words so nicely placed together. Seems your in love eh? :) Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/12/2019 3:07:00 PM Thank you Edward. Love lingers within my heart. I appreciate your kind words. :) Brandy

John Gondolf Date: 7/12/2019 11:42:00 AM A beautifully penned poem, B. Your sensuality and passion are oozing across the parchment and leaving me breathless. All my best to you my dear friend. John Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/12/2019 2:06:00 PM Thank you John. Such a wonderful thing to say. Breathless are moments in love and passion. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Brandy

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/12/2019 7:37:00 AM Passionate indeed! A slice of heavenly delight. Hugs Rick. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/12/2019 2:04:00 PM The need to be close lingers. Thank you Rick for reading this playful poem filled with passion. :) Brandy

Arturo Michael Date: 7/12/2019 7:03:00 AM You take me on a journey...Whatever it is it's magic... Especially, these love poems...Love it... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/12/2019 1:33:00 PM There is magic in love. Your thoughts are always appreciated Arturo. Keep smiling my dear friend. :) Brandy