MOODS OF NATURE - WEATHER

Everything in life is so unpredictable, even in nature.
Hopefully everything will turn out ok in the end!
Wishing you a wonderful day!

MOODS OF NATURE - WEATHER

The clouds suddenly go dark, gloomy and grey,
A rumble of thunder in the distance,
"We should take cover!" I say.
Electrifying!!! The lightening, lights up the sky,
The storm is definitely heading this way!
Crashing noises of anger,
The thunder now rages and roars,
Torrential rain, 
The heavens start to pour, 
Bouncing and dancing,
As the rain hits the floor.
People running quickly to hide inside,
Shivers start to run down my spine.
Looking anxiously for a shelter to find!
Heading for shops, cafes, joining the crowd,
CHANGE OF MOOD 
Ten minutes later, we no longer hide.
The storm has quietened down,
People start to go back outside.
The sky is no longer raining tears,
People smile and look up towards the sky,
A bright coloured, magical rainbow appears!!! 
How beautiful!! It brightens up our day, 
We carry on and continue on our way!
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Date: 7/18/2024 10:51:00 AM
Really delightful, Daisy! What a wonderful picture of a storm and its resolution. This poem has wonderful metaphorical overtones. And, I, too, love rainbows and all their symbolism. Blessings to you!
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Daisy Meadows
Date: 7/21/2024 2:22:00 AM
Rainbows are so lovely to see. Thank you for your kind comments and for reading my posts.
Date: 7/15/2024 2:20:00 PM
Don't you just love those rainbows, dear girl. Precious poem !
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Daisy Meadows
Date: 7/16/2024 7:01:00 AM
Thank you! Yes, rainbows are so beautiful!!
Date: 7/15/2024 9:04:00 AM
The changes in weather are so abrupt. The clear sky can become cloudy and rain may pour down with thunder and lightning. But in no time, the sky can become clear once again. The description of the sudden rain and the appearance of a rainbow in the sky are so arresting.
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Daisy Meadows
Date: 7/16/2024 7:02:00 AM
Thank you! Yes, the weather is so unpredictable and goes from one extreme to another.
Date: 7/14/2024 6:07:00 AM
Such beautiful imagery of a sudden rainstorm. I enjoyed reading.
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Daisy Meadows
Date: 7/15/2024 5:17:00 AM
Thank you. I appreciate your comments. Glad you liked the poem.
Date: 7/12/2024 12:58:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write about the weather. We need rain here...  Have a great day..................
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Daisy Meadows
Date: 7/15/2024 5:17:00 AM
Thank you, Paula. Hope you have a lovely day.
Date: 7/12/2024 10:19:00 AM
A beautifully written piece, Daisy. The weather is one topic everyone’s talks about, at least in my neck of the woods. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Date: 7/15/2024 5:19:00 AM
Yes and the weather has been so unpredictable for this time of the year. Thank you for your comments and for reading my posts.
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