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Magpies


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  Mellow melodies of magpies in enchanted wood herald spring.

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springmonoku

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/22/2025 4:42:00 PM

alliterative words and an enjoyable read :-) Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/29/2025 8:13:00 PM

A pretty poem!

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/28/2025 6:55:00 PM

Short but so very sweet Victor, I love the cheerful melodies of the birds in my neighborhood. There is so much joy as they are busy with their nests!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2025 11:16:00 PM

That's so nice. I like the idea of heralding spring

Dennis Spilchuk

Date: 5/25/2025 8:26:00 AM

Beautiful Spring imagery; nicely done.

Joe Dimino

Date: 5/24/2025 7:12:00 AM

Quite a capture, imagery in flight! Well done, Victor.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/24/2025 6:51:00 AM

Dear Victor, what lovely language play, alliteration, and smooth cadence! Beautiful and moving monoku.

Maria Williams

Date: 5/24/2025 1:34:00 AM

Dearest Victor, your poem is soft and lyrical—this feels like a breath of fresh spring air. I can almost hear the magpies singing. Truly enchanting in just a few words...Hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/23/2025 10:57:00 PM

The single, beautiful line paints a charming picture of springtime, Victor. Have a nice weekend. :)

Alesia Leach

Date: 5/23/2025 5:41:00 PM

This monoku sings like morning--simple, elegant, and full of quiet promise. “Enchanted wood herald spring” is such a lovely image. A single line, yet it opens a whole season.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/23/2025 12:24:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your lovely "Magpies" Monoku write. What A Pretty Picture. I love one liners. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful weekeend writing away...........

Ink Empress

Date: 5/23/2025 11:32:00 AM

Beautiful wordplay and alliterations and seamless flow dear victor! Stunning and evocative monoku. I love “ herald spring” the most! Pleasure visiting! Sending you light always

Joseph May

Date: 5/23/2025 10:34:00 AM

Harbingers of spring, Nicely expressed

Tom Woody

Date: 5/23/2025 8:50:00 AM

Lovely one liner Victor. Wishing you peace and health

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2025 8:05:00 AM

Love this. Great alliteration

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/23/2025 7:13:00 AM

The picture displays a beautiful bird. Makes me want to take flight. I could imagine seeing a few of these around here what a nice treat it would add. Thanks for sharing your lines with us. Sara K