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***************************************** Mellow melodies of magpies in enchanted wood herald spring. *****************************************************

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 5/25/2025 11:16:00 PM
That's so nice. I like the idea of heralding spring
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Date: 5/25/2025 8:26:00 AM
Beautiful Spring imagery; nicely done.
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Date: 5/24/2025 7:12:00 AM
Quite a capture, imagery in flight! Well done, Victor.
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Date: 5/24/2025 6:51:00 AM
Dear Victor, what lovely language play, alliteration, and smooth cadence! Beautiful and moving monoku.
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Date: 5/24/2025 1:34:00 AM
Dearest Victor, your poem is soft and lyrical—this feels like a breath of fresh spring air. I can almost hear the magpies singing. Truly enchanting in just a few words...Hugs
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Date: 5/23/2025 10:57:00 PM
The single, beautiful line paints a charming picture of springtime, Victor. Have a nice weekend. :)
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Date: 5/23/2025 5:41:00 PM
This monoku sings like morning--simple, elegant, and full of quiet promise. “Enchanted wood herald spring” is such a lovely image. A single line, yet it opens a whole season.
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Date: 5/23/2025 12:24:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "Magpies" Monoku write. What A Pretty Picture. I love one liners. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful weekeend writing away...........
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Date: 5/23/2025 11:32:00 AM
Beautiful wordplay and alliterations and seamless flow dear victor! Stunning and evocative monoku. I love “ herald spring” the most! Pleasure visiting! Sending you light always
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Date: 5/23/2025 10:34:00 AM
Harbingers of spring, Nicely expressed
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Date: 5/23/2025 8:50:00 AM
Lovely one liner Victor. Wishing you peace and health
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Date: 5/23/2025 8:05:00 AM
Love this. Great alliteration
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Date: 5/23/2025 7:13:00 AM
The picture displays a beautiful bird. Makes me want to take flight. I could imagine seeing a few of these around here what a nice treat it would add. Thanks for sharing your lines with us. Sara K
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Date: 5/23/2025 5:35:00 AM
- ... lovely spring melodies, Victor :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 5/23/2025 5:10:00 AM
delicious, so many things in a few words, merci poète, i love these birds, despite bad reputation, have a nice week end
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