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Light Up My Fantasy

"The essence of art is to recapture the fantasy and the imagination of a child again, but without the innocence of a child."
~Romare Bearden


she had been reaching for all the wrong stars and told a dream would not take her far she never allowed her imagination to let go of her hand fear keeping her near on safe, familiar land do not let your reverie off of the sidewalk bundle up any whimsy and keep an eye on the clock point your eyes straight ahead, keep your feet on the ground there will be no fantasy visualization, nor glittering pink melodic sound all of which she tried to obey, with self-discipline her fanciful tenancies allay but her mind rebelled and took control of the wheel steering her into a hallucination until she lost the real one can be controlled, the other cannot those who forced discipline, conveniently forgot all art, great and small, comes from a mind that's recklessly daydreaming most of the time living in a fantasy land with magic, fairies, and such creating the poetry, art ,and music we all love so much the stars she had been reaching for were all wrong for the light that she needed was inside all along
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Date: 6/29/2025 11:42:00 AM
Nice, we never want to let go of our imagination. I especially love the last line.
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Date: 6/27/2025 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your powerful "Light Up My Fantasy" write. Fear will keep us safe but imagination will take us to new places. Great Ending, yes inside all along. Have a blessed day with your win.......
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/29/2025 7:20:00 AM
Awe you are the sweetest Paula! Thanks for always reading my poetry! Xo
Date: 6/19/2025 10:13:00 AM
What a powerful distillation of an experience with one's mind/past, exploring its implications on art, Crystol. The personification of imagination, reverie and whimsy are particularly evocative. It's a favorite.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/19/2025 12:10:00 PM
Oh wow! Tysm Jaymee! What a wonderful review! Xo
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