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Last Flicker of the Pearl - Hiku 28 -

Written: July 25, 2025, for contest by Brian Strand **************** t * / /|\ w~a~v~e~s a up the l* \ i* e g* h* t***\|/ * h e r a t made it i n t o a s t o n e— slight p e a r l still s ` a ` i ` g ` h ~ k ~ n

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Date: 7/29/2025 9:31:00 PM
A breathtaking haiku.
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Date: 7/28/2025 1:31:00 PM
Interesting layout on this winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Congrats. Sara K
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Date: 7/28/2025 2:59:00 AM
Back to your poem with Congratulations on your first place win, dear friend.
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Date: 7/28/2025 2:54:00 AM
You put a lot of handwork here. Congratulations on your 1st place win, Sotto. Stay creative!^___^ JCB
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Date: 7/28/2025 1:11:00 AM
Sotto, Your divine penmanship at its most creative and conceptually rich has been awarded a fitting accolade. Intriguing letter alignments adds to my fascination with this poem. Howard
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Date: 7/27/2025 10:19:00 PM
Your pearl gleams, though waves of distress have eaten up all light. Very creative haiku. All the best in the contest, dear friend.
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Date: 7/25/2025 9:24:00 PM
Very creative poetry, my dear friend. Good luck in the contest! Bill
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Date: 7/25/2025 5:18:00 PM
I'm amazed at your ability to create this poetic form! Your Haiku does flicker :-) Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
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Date: 7/25/2025 10:55:00 AM
You have become quite a master of these poems.
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Date: 7/25/2025 9:11:00 AM
What a fun Haiku write. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away...............
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Date: 7/25/2025 7:21:00 AM
It flickers brightly!!
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