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Read the Haiku up and down, not across

kite

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                                                   unravels
                                                   
                                     inch                            new
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                                     inch            flying           kite
                                                       h               lifts
                                     soft             i                 in
                                     string          g             March
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Marilene Evans Date: 8/28/2025 12:51:00 PM Congratulations, Sara! Your creativity soars in the wind ... just like your kite! Blessings, M. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/28/2025 5:11:00 PM Your creative review is encouraging as are the congrats, Marilene. Thank you for the time spent here. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/28/2025 10:22:00 AM - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Sara :) - hugs Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/28/2025 5:09:00 PM Anne-Lise, I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Love the smiley face. Sara K

Sotto Poet Date: 8/28/2025 9:26:00 AM Luminous visions, intriguing structure, and an adventure that awakens the emotions. Congrats on your win Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/28/2025 5:09:00 PM Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate you dropping by with congrats. Sara K

Valsa George Date: 8/20/2025 2:16:00 AM This is beautifully shaped like a kite soaring higher and higher. Great haiku and beautiful graphic representation. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/20/2025 4:14:00 AM Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting. Sara K

Howard Kerr Date: 8/14/2025 10:26:00 PM Hi Sara, I’m most impressed by this original and creative piece. Apt structure and matching wordplay Howard Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/15/2025 4:09:00 AM Thank you, Howard, for such a nice comment. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar Date: 8/11/2025 8:21:00 AM Lovely shape. Thanks for reading my short poem. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/11/2025 12:19:00 PM Thank you, Victor. Your visits are uplifting. Sara K

Rowena Velasco Date: 8/10/2025 8:05:00 PM This is such a charming and visually engaging piece, Sara! I love how the words themselves take the shape of the kite’s movement—your layout really makes the reader feel the slow unravelling of the string and the lift into the March sky. It’s playful yet gentle, like watching a real kite catch the wind. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/11/2025 4:13:00 AM Awesome that it is like watching like a real kite catch the wind. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/9/2025 9:52:00 PM Sara, this is such a wonderful childhood moment you've captured in haiku. So well crafted! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 12:10:00 PM Thank you, Evelyn. I appreciate the kind review. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/9/2025 5:19:00 PM Very nice! Holding onto the string as a March wind blows… Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 12:10:00 PM Why, thank you, Kim. Kites add a special touch to a breezy day. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/9/2025 9:59:00 AM - Creative and great writing, Sara :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/9/2025 4:08:00 PM Why, thank you, Anne-Lise. Thanks for the visit with good wishes. Sara K