kite

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Image result for free pictures of small homemade kite flying in march Read the Haiku up and down, not across

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                                                   unravels
                                                   
                                     inch                            new
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                                     inch            flying           kite
                                                       h               lifts
                                     soft             i                 in
                                     string          g             March
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Valsa George

Date: 8/20/2025 2:16:00 AM

This is beautifully shaped like a kite soaring higher and higher. Great haiku and beautiful graphic representation.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/20/2025 4:14:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting. Sara K

Howard Kerr

Date: 8/14/2025 10:26:00 PM

Hi Sara, I’m most impressed by this original and creative piece. Apt structure and matching wordplay Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/15/2025 4:09:00 AM

Thank you, Howard, for such a nice comment. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/11/2025 8:21:00 AM

Lovely shape. Thanks for reading my short poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/11/2025 12:19:00 PM

Thank you, Victor. Your visits are uplifting. Sara K

Rowena Velasco

Date: 8/10/2025 8:05:00 PM

This is such a charming and visually engaging piece, Sara! I love how the words themselves take the shape of the kite’s movement—your layout really makes the reader feel the slow unravelling of the string and the lift into the March sky. It’s playful yet gentle, like watching a real kite catch the wind.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/11/2025 4:13:00 AM

Awesome that it is like watching like a real kite catch the wind. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K