Intuision
Trusting your instincts relying on your initiative
If you have to make that split second decision
Though mixed messages at time's not intuitive
Can quit often leave one in an awkward position
Is wisdom strength, guess depends on intension
Being a doa rather than a thinker, less attentive
Perhaps its though down to a particular situation
Acting on impulse or naturally, being aggressive
Or perhaps it's being choose, being a bit selective
It's easy giving advice but also it's choosing to listen
If you want to take it on board, it's showing incentive
Swallowing your pride, shedding your every inhibition
Though I've never been someone who's uninquisitive
I'm always questioning things I guess looking for reason
But going against my better judgment, not so instinctive
If only I could trust my instincts and just follow my intuition
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NOTE TO READERS JUST TWEEKED A LITTLE LAST COUPLE OF LINES
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AGAIN INSPERATION CAME FROM ALL THE SUPER COOL SOUP POETS THANKYOU XXXXXXX
THIS TOOK QUIT A WHILE TO PUT TOGEATHER I STARTED THE BACK END OF LAST YEAR
SO MUCH GOING ON AT TIME I WANTED TO GIVE MENING AN A BIT OF DEPH BUT
STILL KEEP IT SIMPLE MY MESAGE HERE IS I SUPOSE NOT ALWAYS LISTENING TO OTHERS
STILL IF YOU KNOW YOUR RIGHT LEARNING TO BITE YOUR TOUGE
THIS IB DONE IN THE SAME CONTEXT AS FATE AND COURIOSITY WHCH I CONCIDER
TO BE MORE STRUCTURE AND OF GREATER IMPORTANCE I ALSO
FEEL I WROTE THIS NOT JUST ON MY EXSPERANECS BUT ALSO Wanted to be
FOR EVERYONE OUT THERE INSPIERD BYOTHER SOUP MEMBERS AND SELF
WRITTEN BY MY SELF DAVIDSCOTT BETWEEN SEPT 2012 AND MARCH 2013,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
note help me if you can with fith line the word aspiration dose it fit dont know??
probably make no sense
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