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Poetry/Verse/in the trees/AI Free
Copyright Protected, ID P-6-1742117-27
All Rights Reserved,  2025, Constance La France
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Written, June 27, 2024
For the International Contest, 1393
Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 07/01/2025

Eighth Place

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in the trees



     I meander past 
                  a rippling stream
    my hair blowing
                      in the whirling wind
       pausing ...
                  is that my name
                            being whispered
          in the tangled trees
                   I swirl
                          twirl to bird songs
      my name just a fading 
                        haunting echo
                    then only silence sighs
       in the trees
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 7/2/2025 2:47:00 PM
Very lovely, Constance. Congrats in Brian's contest
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Constance La France
Date: 7/4/2025 11:06:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment and congrats, Constance
Date: 6/30/2025 10:54:00 AM
I love being in the forest with the whispering trees. I enjoyed this Constace. :)
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Constance La France
Date: 7/1/2025 8:47:00 AM
Linda, thank you for the nice comment, and compliment, appreciate, Constance
Date: 6/27/2025 3:35:00 PM
Hello Constance, I can picture this scene. Love & Friendship, /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/30/2025 3:51:00 PM
Hello Constance, Yo are welcome. Love & Friendship, /Darlene/
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Constance La France
Date: 6/29/2025 5:00:00 PM
Darlene thank you for the comment, appreciate, blessings, Constance
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