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In The Eye Of The Storm

It has no conscious and does not care! To know it's coming brings much despair! A Great Big Bully, lands on this earth. This spinning funnel is heading North! Dark clouds You see, hailstones and Rain! Destruction follows, Strong Winds to blame! The Weather channel on high Alert! Warns increase wind gust, are getting worse! Nowhere to run to, nowhere to go! You're at its mercy, loosing all hope! A cursed word screamed at the howling wind! As windows break, and the storm roars in! You Brace yourself as it makes impact! Your home lifts up, drops, as you react! Your at its Mercy, as debris flies! In a state of shock, but still alive! Your soul is shaken, as winds die down! Destruction and damage, all around! You catch your breath, there's nothing left! Broken and crying, from this Attack! The storm is over, calmness returns. Oh No, Near Cuba, another Storm!!!!! Michael Tor Michael Tor I wrote this for all those souls including my brother Gus and his family that are waiting for Miltons's wrath. Please pray for these souls. Thank you.

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Date: 11/19/2024 7:40:00 PM
Gosh I think I somehow missed this one. A powerful and touching poem, I sure hope these people have found some relief by now
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Michael Tor
Date: 11/21/2024 4:17:00 PM
I hope so too Andrea it was such an awful Storm. Thanks for stopping by. Hugs...
Date: 10/30/2024 12:38:00 AM
The images I see on TV are heartbreaking Michael, some people have lost everything. Tom
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/31/2024 7:57:00 PM
Off the grid with Dog and Stacy a Youtube podcast that I follow. Reported what their son had told them being part of Helene's recovery team that the word out there was not what the media claimed of over 200 that had perished. His estimation from being there and what he saw and heard was tens of thousands had perished. Ask yourself why the controlled media is underestimating the death count. You can't trust the fake news Tom. Keep your common sense in your pocket and never trust your government and the media, they are on the same team against us...
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/31/2024 7:51:00 PM
Luckily my brothers home did not get wrecked like a few of his neighbors. He sent me a video of a Tornado two hundred feet from his home, it was almost black. The family were bracing themselves for impact.... He said his neighbors had damage. These acts of nature ( or our government some say) are random and they build up in a few days out at sea and turn into Monsters. Those living on the West Coast get hit the worst. They usually travel in a Northeast direction and hit the Southern states like South Carolina and North Carolina where Helene killed many.
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/31/2024 7:47:00 PM
Tom where my brother lives in St Lucie County, was one of the worst places it hit. It wasn't expected because he lives so much inland but they were close to the Eye of the Hurricane. Ironically there were 58 Tornadoes that were formed from this storm and they all landed in St Lucie County. The word on the street is that the media down played how many died. My brother told me that four had died in a trailer park, the tornadoes devestated the park, to the bare foundations. They found a car on top of a house. That is the power of a Tornado that formed from the Hurricane.
Date: 10/24/2024 11:13:00 AM
I do not know how I missed this one. Another powerful write. Hope your brother is still OK after Miltons's wrath. I heard St. Lucie got hit hard. I hope he/family are still OK. Florida is a great place except when the storms show up. As a kid, I can remember water running out of my dad's car with small boat going down the streets. Guess everywhere has some kind of bad weather from time to time. Hugs... Have a Great/Blessed Day As You Write Away..................
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/28/2024 4:08:00 AM
Thank you Paula. My brother is OK. He lives in one of the worst counties that were hit by the storm. Port St Lucie. Florida is a beautiful state but the Hurricanes really give it a bad name. I hope you are well and I thank you for stopping bye. Hugs and blessings your way...
Date: 10/14/2024 12:48:00 PM
You described the storm very well and have written a great poem.. I hope your brother Gus is ok and has not had any of his property damaged.. I hope you are well also..
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/19/2024 8:45:00 PM
Hello my friend. My brother is OK. He told me in the County of St Lucie where he lives 58 Tornadoes touched down. They did the most damage. His neighbors had house damage it wasn't as severe as other parts of Florida. These storms are becoming a regular event. It causes much stress among the Floridians that live there. I rather face the snow blizzards up here in NY then the Hurricanes in Florida. It seems like you cant win. Hope you are well my friend and so glad to see you doing what you do best and that is writing...
Date: 10/13/2024 5:36:00 AM
One cannot but pray for those souls who are suffering these terrible storms. May God help them.
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/19/2024 8:34:00 PM
Yes Victor may God help them my friend. Much more have died then what the news media are reporting. Helene I heard were tens of thousands. You cant trust the news media. Hope you are well Victor, thank you Sir for stopping by, God keep you healthy my friend...
Date: 10/11/2024 11:32:00 PM
Hi Michael, my prayers are certainly with them now , as I have just read this poem, are they safe Michael, I pray God they are! Such a worry for families who have loved ones living far away. Many of us have, some haven't, such a blessing, hugs dear friend, Jennifer..
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/19/2024 8:32:00 PM
Thank you Dear Jennifer. They are safe. 68 tornadoes touched down in their County four died but they the media controlled minions aren't reporting the truth/ Tens of thousands have died in Hellenes destruction. Hope you are healthy and safe Jennifer, God bless you...
Date: 10/10/2024 10:37:00 PM
Very heartfelt, I apologize for not commenting more, I hate that non premium members don't show up when I look. Hope you are well.
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/11/2024 8:15:00 AM
Hi Arthur, thank you Sir for coming by. I did not know non premium don't show up. I definitely have to become a premium member. I have put it off too long. It sure is heartfelt. My brother said 58 Tornadoes touch down in the County he lives on, a record amount cars on rooftops, trailer parks wiped out. So far in his area five people gave their lives to Milton. Sadly these monsters are turning up every month and more. I appreciate your support. God bless you my friend...
Date: 10/10/2024 12:25:00 AM
My thoughts and prayers Michael..' May God Support Florida.)
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/10/2024 7:31:00 AM
Thank you Joe for your prayers my friend. Four deaths in St Lucie county where my brother lives. Trailers were wiped out, cars were found on top of roofs. Unbelievable.
Date: 10/9/2024 12:24:00 PM
Blees your family, Gov,De santis does have places open for people to go to. Nobody has to stay home, I have a friend in Florida also. But he wont leave his house.You cannot fight the power of winds at 185 MPH. It will killl any human being..This is not like..fighting off a ccold, Shelters are protected heavily,i wish your family the best.Pangie xx
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/10/2024 7:33:00 AM
Thank you Pangie for your kind words. Four have died in St Lucie county. 58 tornadoes went through the County. My brother and his wife were praying all night. They did not sleep...
Date: 10/9/2024 11:04:00 AM
Hello Michael Tore of course I will say a prayer for your family. I hope all goes well for them. I will pray for you as well.. Take care my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/10/2024 10:20:00 AM
Hello Michael, i prayed for your family last night. i hope they are all okay. Your welcome. Take care my friend. /Darlene/
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/10/2024 7:33:00 AM
Thank you Dear Darlene for your kind words...
Date: 10/9/2024 10:49:00 AM
Just saw it on the news Michael, looks a devastating one, hope all your family will be safe. Tom
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/10/2024 7:37:00 AM
Tom I just talked to my brother in St Lucie county a record 58 tornadoes touched down in his county killing many. He sent me a picture of a tornado putting a car on top of a house. He said he could see the tornado through his windows and he said it just missed missed his house it did go through the gated community he lives in and said it destroyed one of the homes there. We prayed for him and God delivered Tom. Thank you Sir for stopping by...
Date: 10/9/2024 10:38:00 AM
Prayerful poem Michael. I think most of us have family or friends in Florida. It's not going to be pretty
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/10/2024 7:38:00 AM
Tom you are right it wasn't pretty and it's not over. Read the responses above. Thank you for coming by...
Date: 10/9/2024 9:54:00 AM
You portrayed this monster storm so so well I know many families are in the path of this beast Michael, lets hope that everyone stays safe, it is a terribly worrying situation. thinking of you:-) hugs Jan xx
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/9/2024 10:05:00 AM
Thank you Jan my brother lives in Port St Lucie. He is according to the trajectory very close to the eye if this Monster turns South. If it continues on its trajectory he will be 20 miles from the edge of it. They are saying tonight it will touch down. They also are saying this is one of the worst storms. So many souls in jeopardy Jan. I will be praying for all Floridians. Now Tornadoes are touching down already in Florida and the wind gust for Milton is 175 miles per hour. Many tornado warnings.. Yes Jan lets hope everyone stays safe. God bless you and a big hug.

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