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In The Dim Light Seen

In the dim light seen
The trees show a theme
A tree of a  human
With a high forehead
With a long nose
Fingertips to his lip
Saying be quiet
I'm trying to sleep

Raindrops on the windowpane
Many raindrops spread out
From the window to the ground
Raindrops from the sky
This is seen from the lamp post
Raindrops from the sky
Shining in the dim light
In the evening night

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Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther

Date: 7/5/2024 9:57:00 AM

Hey Darlene I just finished your IN THE DIM LIGHT SEEN. Enjoyment. I must say it provoked thought. Glad I read this. VBR Black Panther! Malik Rogers! Mali Mali

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/6/2024 10:01:00 AM

Hello Val, Oh! it provoked thought? Oh, i hope it was a good thought. thank you for this wonderful comment. /Darlene/Hugs.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/10/2024 1:12:00 PM

So Sorry, Darlene, looks like I missed your POTD. Belated Congratulations, Dear Friend. Images in your poems are very true, very real - they are taken from your every-day observations. Weather is getting better, hope you enjoy the weekend. Love and warm wishes ~

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/10/2024 3:11:00 PM

Hello mala, That is okay. Better late than never, i always say. thank you. I am honored to receive this POTD. It was cool today. I was dressed for summer weather. I was cold. Oh well. Love & Friendship, Darlene

Deb M

Date: 4/22/2024 5:59:00 AM

Belated POTD Congratulations Sweet Darlene on your lovely about the trees in dim light….great imagery! I love seeing your name up here Darlene it makes me happy! Debx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/22/2024 10:23:00 AM

Hello Deb, thank you for the belated POTD. I am honored to have it. Belated is okay. Deb. thank you Deb. Hugs. /Darlene/

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/7/2024 9:19:00 AM

Sorry I missed your POTD Darlene! A belated congratulations on a well deserved selection! Happy Sunday xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/7/2024 10:33:00 AM

Hello Mike, Oh , that is okay. I say "Better late than never." I hope all is well with you. Happy Sunday. xxoo/Darlene/

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 4/6/2024 3:45:00 PM

Sorry Darlene. I missed the day. CONGRATULATIONS ON THE POTD. But this is something more important than that. This poem has much to say, maybe a bad dream, maybe just raindrops falling in your dream. So good and so real. That's what I like from you. Realism. Have a better dream tonight my Darlenexxxx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/2/2024 2:55:00 PM

Hello Maria, thank you Maria. I am honored to receive it. thank yuou maria. I will try to have a better dream. Hugs. My friend Maria. Hugs. xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/6/2024 1:18:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD, Darlene!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/13/2024 10:13:00 AM

HellKim, thank you for the lovely comment. I am honored to receive this POTD. Hugs. /darlene/

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/6/2024 5:19:00 AM

Congratulations for POTD Darlene :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/6/2024 10:36:00 AM

Hello Heidi, Thank you. I am honored to receive this POTD Hugs. /Darlene/

Michael Tor

Date: 4/5/2024 12:12:00 AM

Congratulations Darlene for your POTD.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/5/2024 11:17:00 AM

Hello Michael Tor, I hope you had a Happy Easter. I am honored to receive this POTD. Thank you Michael. Enjoy your day my friend. ?Darlene/

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/3/2024 2:33:00 AM

Great poem, my friend. I wish to read more of your poems. Your imagery is great.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/3/2024 12:13:00 PM

Hello Victor, Thank you ,Victor. Thank you for the lovely comment my friend. /Darlene/ Enjohy your day.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/2/2024 8:13:00 PM

Intriguing image of the tree, Darlene. I hadn't realized this was POTD, but now that I do: Congratulations!! ~ Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/3/2024 12:16:00 PM

Hello Gershon, Thank you Gershon. I am Enjoy your day honored to receive this POTD. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/1/2024 11:29:00 AM

Beautiful poetry!! Well deserved POTD. Brava!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/1/2024 2:44:00 PM

Hello Joe, i hope you had a good Easter. thank you for the lovely comment. I am honored to receive this POTD.Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/31/2024 8:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. Sorry is this late. I took the day off. I enjoyed reading your lovely write. "Happy Easter" Have a blessed day.....................

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/31/2024 10:44:00 AM

Hello Paula, Thank you Paula. I am honored to receoive this POTD. There is nothing wrong to take the day off. Happy Easter. Thank you. Hugs. /Darlene/

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 3/31/2024 6:59:00 AM

A beautiful write, Darlene. I love watching the rain as I sip a warm cup of tea. Have a wonderful weekend my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/31/2024 10:47:00 AM

Hello Zyrool , Zyrool we both like to watch thew rain as it hits the window pane. My friend. Happy Easter. /darlene

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/30/2024 9:14:00 AM

This is of the utmost beautiful, dear Darlene! Congratulations on POTD!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/30/2024 11:57:00 AM

Hello Kim, Happy Easter. I am honored to receive this POTD . Hugs. /Darlene/

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/29/2024 9:17:00 PM

Lovely imagism Darlene, love the tree theme and raindrops on the windowpane too. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/30/2024 12:02:00 PM

Hello Bereyl, Beryl i am honored to receive this POTD. Happy Easter. Hugs.l /Darlene/

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/29/2024 5:06:00 PM

I enjoy watching ' Raindrops on the windowpane. ' It creates a beautiful moment, while being soothing, peaceful and poetic; all at the same time. Congratulations Darlene, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/30/2024 12:06:00 PM

Hello Brandy , Yes brandy raindrops are peaceful and soothing. I like to watch the raindrops to. Thank you Brandy I am honored to receive the POTD. Hugs. /Darlene/

Eve Roper

Date: 3/29/2024 4:23:00 PM

Love the poem, especially the line," With a high forehead With a long nose Fingertips to his lip Saying be quiet I'm trying to sleep, making the tree so real. Congratulations on POTD. Happy Easter

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/30/2024 12:11:00 PM

Hello Eve, Eve the tree seems to be real to me. Thank you. I am honored to receive the POTD. Happy .Easter. Hugs. /Darlene/

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/29/2024 3:09:00 PM

Dear Darlene, huge congratulations on receiving honour of POTD. Your poems have a mystic element in it - stunning images from your surrounding convey intriguing thoughts. Happy Easter, Dear Poet. Love and warm wishes ~

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/30/2024 12:16:00 PM

Hello Hi! i hope all is well with you Mala, Happy Easter. I am honored to receive this POTD. Love and warm wishes my friend. /Darlene/

Christina Bowring

Date: 3/29/2024 2:39:00 PM

Dear Darlene, many congratulations on POTD with your beautiful poem. It’s a delight to read and so visual. Love the images that you have created here. Also love the title too - so many shapes and shadows appear in dim light. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing and a very happy Easter! Hugs and smiles xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/30/2024 12:22:00 PM

Hello Christina, Thank you. Yes so many shapes and shadows appear in the dim light. Happy Easter. I am honored to receive the POTD. Hugs. /Darlene/

Daisy Meadows

Date: 3/29/2024 12:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/30/2024 12:19:00 PM

Hello Jeannette, thank you. i am, honor34d to receive the POTD. Happy Easter. Hugs. /Darlene /

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/29/2024 12:31:00 PM

Darlene, I love your hauntingly beautiful poem. It is in my faves. Congratulations on POTD. Blessings, Evelyn

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/30/2024 12:13:00 PM

Hello Eve, oh! Thank you for the fav. Thank you once again. Have a good Easter. Hugs. /Darlene/

Ink Empress

Date: 3/29/2024 12:15:00 PM

Beautiful and soothing flow of words, so well woven and delivered dead darlene, i love how creatively youv painted imagery. And those last lines really stood out for me. Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on receiving POTD. Well deserved. Sending you light always

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/29/2024 12:19:00 PM

Hello Ink Empress, Thank you Ink Express. Happy Easter. I am honored to receive this POTD. Thank you for the Light. Happy Good Firday. /Darlene/

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/29/2024 9:03:00 AM

Darlene, You capture the human perception of nature with kindness and eloquence. Thanks for making me smile today.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/29/2024 12:22:00 PM

Hello Duke, Oh I pleased to have made you smile today. I am honored to receive this POTD. Happy Easter. /Darlene/

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/29/2024 8:44:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Darlene ... congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... enjoy your day :) - hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/29/2024 12:15:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, thank you Sunshine Smile. I am honored to receive this POTD. Happy Easter. Hugs. /Darlene/

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/29/2024 7:55:00 AM

You paint a stunning image with your words Darlene, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Hope you're keeping well. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/29/2024 12:13:00 PM

Hello Tom, Thank you Tom.I am honored to receive this POTD. Happy Easter. I am doing okay. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

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