In a desert

Lost in the darkness
of my mind.
Not looking forward,
I was stuck behind.
Wanton whispers,
my body creaked.
I could not find
those things I seeked

The horse with blinders 
that I rode,
ate from the seeds
that I had sewed.
It layed bloated
on the ground.
Beneath its hooves
no earth was found.

The sun there shone 
upon my head.
I feared the valley 
of the dead.
Tin cup empty,
my throat was parched.
Towards my doom,
the clouds were arched.

Then I felt
God’s gracious hand.
There was an escape 
I had not planned.
His voice whispered 
in my ear.
“Do not fear 
for I am here.”

A new light grew
before my eyes.
I no longer believed
the devil’s lies.
There was safe passage
from the past.
A splendid future,
my horizon vast.
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Date: 12/27/2023 7:01:00 PM
Hi Rick makes one do some soul searching which is a good thing hugs Shadow
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Date: 12/13/2023 5:51:00 AM
Unfortunately the comment I posted earlier didn't reach you. From an irredeemable condition God lifted you up giving a new lease of life. It is in the most distressing hours that He comes to our rescue. Poignantly penned, your struggle and your rebirth into a new life. Enjoy the light that has been poured in your path, dear Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/13/2023 7:31:00 AM
Thanks, the light was gifted to me in my early twenties. I have much to be thankful for.
Date: 12/10/2023 3:13:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem today!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/11/2023 7:10:00 AM
Thanks Karen.
Date: 12/10/2023 8:51:00 AM
Wow, I love how this poem ended on such a hopeful note, where His divine guidance pulls the soul out of abysmal darkness.. No matter how gloomy or aching it turns, God's presence will always reflect its magic in the end.. Your wordplay is really captivating here and the flow is so impeccable too! A beautiful write, loved reading this.. :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/11/2023 7:10:00 AM
What a beautiful response. Blessings Richard.
Date: 12/10/2023 1:17:00 AM
Sometimes we all find ourselves in that barren wilderness but if we open our hearts to him, he'll take our hand and guide us to paradise. Tom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2023 6:35:00 AM
Very true Tom.
Date: 12/9/2023 8:30:00 PM
Your poetic words seem to reach into one’s very soul..and finding truth in “His voice” is the right direction for salvation. This one touched me and is a fav. Thank you! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/9/2023 11:00:00 PM
Thanks for this awesome response.
Date: 12/9/2023 6:52:00 AM
the flow of this has a very catchy cadence and youv Written and expressed such deep and heartfelt thoughts, so much has been said in a poetic manner with rhymes in a beautiful rhythm. Sometimes light is all we need to find our true selves. Faith gets us places: pleasure reading you always.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/9/2023 9:01:00 AM
Thanks for your generous comment and compliment. Blessings Richard.
Date: 12/8/2023 6:41:00 PM
A very well written poem. It also had a very interesting story
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/9/2023 5:48:00 AM
Much appreciated.
Date: 12/8/2023 1:10:00 PM
Richard, your Poem is so eloquent, bright, and moving; it is brimming with intricate creativity and profound introspection. You possess a linguistic ability that is in tandem supple and substantial.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/9/2023 5:50:00 AM
You are most kind my friend.
Date: 12/8/2023 1:03:00 PM
Deep introspection..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/8/2023 1:04:00 PM
Thanks for reading.
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