ICE


Enjoy the heat
Ice laced drinks
Summer's best treat

Catch forty winks
Cherish hammock time
Swinging mind thinks

The sea sublime
Entreats to compete
Swim solo chime


Form: POI

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/25/2024 1:02:00 PM

Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 5/25/2024 10:44:00 AM

You did this form very well..

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/22/2024 2:28:00 AM

I would find it difficult for me but you did a good job. Best for a win.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/22/2024 2:11:00 AM

Creatively woven icy write that is so warm and beautiful! I am not sure how this contest is to be done yet, but i think youv nailed it! So effortlessly dear joanna. Best wishes for the contest