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I Simply Want To Be

I simply want to be
Where the wind blows free
Where the air is crisp and clean
No skyscrapers to be seen

No vehicles everywhere
Or pollution in the air
Just natures fields of green
With a flowing ravine

No hatred nor anger here
Only peace ,kindness and nothing to fear
A simple ,tranquil place where my being is at rest
Where l am truly content and blessed!

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Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/10/2025 2:16:00 PM I enjoyed reading your powerful write. I have been looking for this place for many years. I think it is Not on earth. For it is heaven... Have a fun/blessed day as you write away............ Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/14/2025 4:40:00 PM What a sweet comment…..’for it is heaven’….thanks Paula! Debx

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/9/2025 7:55:00 PM Six feet under doesn't work for me! lol. ~ gw Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/10/2025 1:46:00 AM Me either BB Ha! Debx

Oliver Mckeithan Date: 3/9/2025 11:57:00 AM It would be nice to have what you have written Deb. Beautiful imagery that makes us all want to be there. Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/10/2025 1:56:00 AM Thanks so much Oliver…..l appreciate your kind words! Debx

Susan Ashley Date: 3/9/2025 9:06:00 AM Dear Deb, "I simply want to be" too! Your vivid and peaceful imagery expresses this dream, desire with thoughtful beauty and poetic finesse. I will follow you there, my inspiring poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/10/2025 4:26:00 AM Well come with me then Susan (and Lin)…..we can write poetry, chat, have a nice latte or drink of your choice and just relax and enjoy nature and its tranquility….without a worry in the world…now wouldn't that be wonderful! See you there my lovely friend and thankyou!! Debx

Lin Lane Date: 3/9/2025 7:30:00 AM Where city lights don’t keep us from seeing stars and night and everything we say isn’t taken as an invitation to fight. I wanna go there with you, Deb. I bet it’s like that in Milton Creek because we keep it that way. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 3/10/2025 4:37:00 AM I will be ready and anxiously waiting for you. Deb M Date: 3/10/2025 4:33:00 AM Come along lovely Lin it would be so much fun….l will pick you up in the morning 10am your time! Hehe….Debx

Jan Allison Date: 3/9/2025 7:27:00 AM If only Deb - we have lots of green fields, little light pollution in some areas and no skyscrapers here - do come and visit! as for peace that's something the world can dream of bud sadly it will never happen. hugs jan xx Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/10/2025 4:21:00 AM Yes IOM is a lovely Island for sure! My mum was born there! Thankyou my lovely friend! Debx

Yann Rolland Date: 3/9/2025 7:11:00 AM so do I, i could feel the envy of liberty and rest , i feel the same very often, well written Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/10/2025 4:19:00 AM A place of tranquility Yann! Thanks…Debx