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someone called 911 a neighbor or someone just walking by they told the operator the person who lived there had not been seen in days someone else called telling the operator a foul scent was emitting from the house across the street when an officer got there from what he smelled the situation looked bleak when he tried to get in the front door wouldn't open looking in dark windows he knew in there were no tokens he had to call for back-up the situation looked and smelled of horror homicide was called and told don't wait until tomorrow an officer with a gas mask got inside the home there lay a dead woman and her dog surrounded by boxes and boxes of snippets of paper upon which she had written poems then several months later upon bookstore shelves were her poems in a neat book carrying the title i wrote these by myself
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Date: 5/15/2025 3:13:00 PM
I like this poem a lot. The sad story of a woman living and dying alone well told, and the irony at the end is a delicious touch. Well done!
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Date: 4/28/2025 12:21:00 AM
A sad story. On seeing the image and reading the first few lines I got a feeling that 'something is rotten in the state of Denmark' . Poor lady, she must have died of heart attack while still writing a poem. Though sad, this is an intriguing tale, dear Sara.
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Date: 4/19/2025 1:21:00 AM
Death is always sad but at least her poems lived after her.
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Date: 4/18/2025 11:11:00 PM
A sad write for the hoarder butgreat that her papers with poems all over them were collected,collated and published a kind gesture by some kind soul! A unique write, well.done.my friend. Hugs Blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 4/16/2025 5:04:00 AM
Dear sara, You are an amazing storyteller really! This got me hooked from the very first line till the end, intrigued to find out whats next! Beautiful flow to your sad and heart-wrenching poetic tale! Pleasure visiting you today! Sending you light always
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Date: 4/11/2025 2:36:00 PM
a way to eternety, a sad story but a true destiny, merci poétesse
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Date: 4/11/2025 11:48:00 AM
Wow! Sad and fantastic! We stayed with someone, once, that wasn’t taking care. The unhappiness was palpable.
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Date: 4/11/2025 8:37:00 AM
- It must be terrible to live that way... great written, Sara :) - hugs
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Date: 4/11/2025 7:20:00 AM
Poignant poem that revolves around plagiarism in a very sensitive way, Sara. Enjoyed reading your beautiful poem.
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