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Harvest Moon Nights

Sweet summer is kissing goodbye, 
embracing the harvest moon nights,
summer birds bid adieu and fly,
sweet summer is kissing goodbye, 
earth’s bosom heavy with a sigh,
tears of maple glow in moonlight,
sweet summer is kissing goodbye, 
embracing the harvest moon nights.

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Zyrool Gifford Date: 9/2/2025 10:53:00 PM Hello Vandana, nicely said and beautifully written. Sadly we didn’t have much of a summer here, sad to see it go. Have a great day. Login to Reply Dr. Vandana Sharma Date: 9/2/2025 11:03:00 PM Thanks.

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 9/1/2025 3:01:00 PM Hello Dr. Vandana, I have never seen a harvest moon. Oh it is sad that summer is ending. it is my fav. season. Summer is shnort here. Winter is the longest season. Hugs. /Darlene/ Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 9/3/2025 11:51:00 AM Hello Dr. Vandana, Yes your summers are more hotter than mine .It is not often we get hotter humid temperatures Canada has 4 seasons. How many seasons do you have? Hugs. /Darlene/ Dr. Vandana Sharma Date: 9/2/2025 11:03:00 PM Oops!! summer here is hot and sweaty!!! Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 9/2/2025 10:57:00 AM Hello Dr. Vandana, I am thinking that your summers are a lot hotter than mine are. Hugs. /Darlene Dr. Vandana Sharma Date: 9/2/2025 9:13:00 AM And it is vice versa here. for sure I won't miss summer here!

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 9/1/2025 1:22:00 PM beautifully flowing Triolet. Your words washed over me. Well penned! Login to Reply Dr. Vandana Sharma Date: 9/2/2025 9:12:00 AM Glad you like it.

Woodrow Lucas Date: 9/1/2025 1:13:00 PM Excellent Work!!! Login to Reply Dr. Vandana Sharma Date: 9/2/2025 9:12:00 AM Thank you

Michael Fulkerson Date: 9/1/2025 12:14:00 PM Very beautiful poem. Very well written. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed your poem. Login to Reply Dr. Vandana Sharma Date: 9/2/2025 9:12:00 AM Thank you for your appreciation.

Tony Knox Date: 7/27/2025 2:20:00 PM Lovely work! As the reader pauses for a moment to consider the ephemeral beauty of the seasons in our lives, the rhythmic return of the triolet cadence washes over us like the ebb and flow of ocean waves — soothing, yet tinged with the inevitability of time’s passage. Your night imagery casts a dreamy glow over the piece, lifting it into a space that feels both serene and profound, transporting the reader into a dreamscape where repetition feels comforting yet quietly bound to time’s inevitable advance. Login to Reply Dr. Vandana Sharma Date: 7/27/2025 9:46:00 PM Grateful for your kind and soothing words. Infact, I can see the poetic flow in your appreciation as well.

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 7/19/2025 6:04:00 PM a skillfully written Triolet. You captured the essence of the transition with some beautiful imagery. Best wishes with the contest & welcome to Poetry Soup. Login to Reply Dr. Vandana Sharma Date: 7/19/2025 10:16:00 PM Thank you for your warm and kind words. I have been on PS for around 8-9 years, but wasn't active.

I Am Anaya Date: 7/19/2025 2:59:00 PM Great start with the refrain, love how it flows as well, Dr. Great entry! ~ I Am Anaya and delighted to meet you Login to Reply Dr. Vandana Sharma Date: 7/19/2025 10:17:00 PM Thank you for the appreciation.