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Harvest Moon Nights

Sweet summer is kissing goodbye, embracing the harvest moon nights, summer birds bid adieu and fly, sweet summer is kissing goodbye, earth’s bosom heavy with a sigh, tears of maple glow in moonlight, sweet summer is kissing goodbye, embracing the harvest moon nights.

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Tony Knox

Date: 7/27/2025 2:20:00 PM

Lovely work! As the reader pauses for a moment to consider the ephemeral beauty of the seasons in our lives, the rhythmic return of the triolet cadence washes over us like the ebb and flow of ocean waves — soothing, yet tinged with the inevitability of time’s passage. Your night imagery casts a dreamy glow over the piece, lifting it into a space that feels both serene and profound, transporting the reader into a dreamscape where repetition feels comforting yet quietly bound to time’s inevitable advance.

Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 7/27/2025 9:46:00 PM

Grateful for your kind and soothing words. Infact, I can see the poetic flow in your appreciation as well.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/19/2025 6:04:00 PM

a skillfully written Triolet. You captured the essence of the transition with some beautiful imagery. Best wishes with the contest & welcome to Poetry Soup.

Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 7/19/2025 10:16:00 PM

Thank you for your warm and kind words. I have been on PS for around 8-9 years, but wasn't active.

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/19/2025 2:59:00 PM

Great start with the refrain, love how it flows as well, Dr. Great entry! ~ I Am Anaya and delighted to meet you

Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 7/19/2025 10:17:00 PM

Thank you for the appreciation.