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GOLDEN SUN DESCENDING

GOLDEN SUN DESCENDING
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golden sun descends
warmth lingers in autumn air
gratitude lingers

12th gradenaturesunsethaiku

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Line Gauthier

Date: 9/16/2025 6:11:00 AM

Yes, gratitude is the word that comes most to mind when we see the autumn sun and feel its warmth ~

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2025 6:37:00 PM

I agree...thanks for visiting and commenting

Deb M

Date: 9/16/2025 1:50:00 AM

Short and very sweet Sara! Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2025 6:38:00 PM

thank you, sweet Deb...enjoy your evening, hugs, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/16/2025 1:25:00 AM

A compact and lovely haiku. I have written some but dare not post them yet. Maybe when my muse is dead.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2025 6:38:00 PM

thanks Victor....glad you appreciate Haikus...I look forward to reading one of yours

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2025 9:36:00 PM

Lovely one for my birth month. Could also do well for October!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2025 6:39:00 PM

aww, how thoughtful...appreciate your visit and kind words, Andrea

RGH Poetry

Date: 9/15/2025 8:30:00 PM

Very beautiful Haiku, it all comes together so naturally and wonderfully of nature.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2025 6:39:00 PM

thank you, Ryan...appreciate your meaningful comments

Krishika Upadhyay

Date: 9/15/2025 7:40:00 PM

So gentle and serene ,these lines capture the quiet beauty of autumn’s embrace and the peace that gratitude brings. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2025 6:37:00 PM

thank you, Krishika, for visiting and for your lovely comments. I'm most grateful, Sara

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