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GOLDEN SUN DESCENDING

GOLDEN SUN DESCENDING
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golden sun descends
warmth lingers in autumn air
gratitude lingers

12th gradenaturesunsethaiku

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Line Gauthier

September 16, 2025 at 6:11 AM

Yes, gratitude is the word that comes most to mind when we see the autumn sun and feel its warmth ~

sara Etgen-Baker

September 17, 2025 at 6:37 PM

I agree...thanks for visiting and commenting

Deb M

September 16, 2025 at 1:50 AM

Short and very sweet Sara! Debx

sara Etgen-Baker

September 17, 2025 at 6:38 PM

thank you, sweet Deb...enjoy your evening, hugs, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

September 16, 2025 at 1:25 AM

A compact and lovely haiku. I have written some but dare not post them yet. Maybe when my muse is dead.

sara Etgen-Baker

September 17, 2025 at 6:38 PM

thanks Victor....glad you appreciate Haikus...I look forward to reading one of yours

Andrea Dietrich

September 15, 2025 at 9:36 PM

Lovely one for my birth month. Could also do well for October!

sara Etgen-Baker

September 17, 2025 at 6:39 PM

aww, how thoughtful...appreciate your visit and kind words, Andrea

Krishika Upadhyay

September 15, 2025 at 7:40 PM

So gentle and serene ,these lines capture the quiet beauty of autumn’s embrace and the peace that gratitude brings. Thank you for sharing this with us.

sara Etgen-Baker

September 17, 2025 at 6:37 PM

thank you, Krishika, for visiting and for your lovely comments. I'm most grateful, Sara

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