food footle

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For Brian Strand's Your Choice t Poetry Contest 3 June 2025

pot stew
smells new

pan dry
stir fry

toast  burn
no turn

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Ink Empress

Date: 6/3/2025 7:04:00 AM

Ah so well written footle! Love the rhymes youv done here dear poetic soul! I love the last rhyme the most here altho they all flow well and in a unique theme youv written on! I love always reading you! Best wishes Sending you light always

JCB Brul
Date: 6/3/2025 4:06:00 PM

Thank you dear poetic soul. Your shining feedback always lifts me up. Keep shining. ^___^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2025 11:40:00 PM

Nicely done. For Brian? I will have to check if you are on some of his recent winner lists

JCB Brul
Date: 6/3/2025 3:06:00 AM

I wS late hehe..I'll enter this on the next contest.