Fabled

She struts
from the pages of infamy 
Black bold and beautiful 
No straightening of her Afro 
She owns her gorgeous 

Forget “The man,”
She’s got things to do
Not concerned with his master fetish
In her world women rule
If you cross her
Honey you are the fool

Her voice is smooth dark chocolate 
with just a hint of bitter
She’s both a saint and sinner
No skinny thinking
Curves are for winners

There is rhythm 
running through her veins
She is steeped in strength stories 
birthed from palatial pain
When you try to hold her down
she rises up again

Her every page
the hidden embodiment of America History
She faces the future 
clothed in mystery 
Hear her harmony notes
On forever she floats
Faithfully fantastic
she’s the embodiment of hope.

She’s every true story 
that has ever been told
If you try to confine her
she’s impossible to hold
Add your own 
chapter line and verse
You are born from nobility 
 quench your inner thirst
Perfection 
doesn’t need to be rehearsed. 

Dedicated to my friend Valerie Thibadeaux in honour of Black History Month.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 3/6/2024 11:54:00 AM
A lovely/tribute write to your friend. I hope you have given her a signed copy....  Have a blessed day writing away........................
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Date: 2/23/2024 1:21:00 PM
What an exquisite tribute to your friend, Richard. Its lyrical prose effortlessly encapsulates the essence of an extraordinary, resolute, and regal lady. May you relish the enchantment of this evening, my friend.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2024 4:46:00 PM
Much appreciated.
Date: 2/19/2024 9:22:00 PM
A lovely tribute poem to Valerie Thibadeaux, Rick. Well written and your imagery was vibrant. A sprinkling of alliteration was an added pleasure. Thanks for sharing your admiration of Valerie, for Black History Month. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2024 4:46:00 PM
Thanks Bill. :0)
Date: 2/18/2024 2:11:00 AM
What a lovely dedication to your friend Richard. I love these lines especially... She’s every true story that has ever been told If you try to confine her she’s impossible to hold Add your own chapter line and verse You are born from nobility quench your inner thirst Perfection doesn’t need to be rehearsed. So beautiful...Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2024 4:14:00 AM
You are sweet. Thanks so much.
Date: 2/12/2024 8:55:00 AM
Good one. I enjoyed reading your work today. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/13/2024 5:57:00 AM
Thanks Sara. ;0)
Date: 2/12/2024 5:44:00 AM
The gals are bound to like this one Rick. I thought of Beyonce as I was reading but saw your dedication at the end
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/12/2024 8:20:00 AM
I can see that. Thanks for giving my poem a read.
Date: 2/10/2024 10:07:00 AM
Is it black history month there? We have it in October.. Excellent poem Richard..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2024 6:26:00 PM
Thanks for giving my poem a read.
Date: 2/9/2024 11:06:00 AM
Chocolate, which I love but must fast due to glucose levels. Love your poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/9/2024 2:41:00 PM
Thanks Victor.
Date: 2/9/2024 10:33:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem. Enjoy Black History month. Your poem is a genuine tribute to Chocolate.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/9/2024 2:42:00 PM
Much appreciated.
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