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Sponsor : Tom Woody Contest : Black Hole Love Submitted: 16/7/25 _____________ “Love embodies in millions of forms and frequencies, not all known. Its intrinsic nature is detachment, with eventual dissolution into Godhead. The challenge is learning to move towards detachment using sensory reality, individual soul history & experiential phenomenon to achieve dissolution.” Poet ————————- ~ diamonds intense buried in winter’s dark frozen Love embrace unbearable bearability skulls crack cherished cheekbones pressured fractal faith surrendering in trusting measure miners cold black brains spilling machine holes hack drilling birthing platinum rings chilling peace knows not almond eyes sleek attachment sting with silvery satin hands meek peep an envelope bleakly arrives a simulation game using rock, fountains, flesh possessions and paintings disappear black hole Love enmeshed with hamburger sauce and remorse whilst deep in rural south rise with green breasted hills follicking bat caves a knave with a thousand suns in his eyes tendered daisies with flat noses hazy royalty at play with bare body boned twigs huts without light, freedom not sharply in sight landed on desolate island called Robben Love in a black hole strong bobbin cells in bodies and in prison holds black hole Love which possesses not lessons carved in separation or hesitation as pitch transmutes to blinding white rich detachment grows from red rage to grief golden beholden ! acceptance surrendered lies asleep, in coherent Heart’s silent courage deep locked with confused tears only pug understood then assessed with unwagging tail curly good past intelligence encoded exposes raw passion leaks quantum wounds of father-mother rejection love’s marrow unlocked dim memory ashen adrenaline heard underground cries extracted facets containing aspects to be fashioned once a two metre wave or vortex spiral reaches Eye of Horus unblinking a sword of starlight steel slashes lid stinking out tumble topazes, thighs, tempers already dug drugged, conquered, tamed again octagons, operettas, rivers and rhyme that speak to Gaia’s eight billion, here and there famed then finger a black hole blacker than black stare it down with sacral pump achieved perhaps breath of fire jump then weave inevitably it sinks knees into shocking purity conceived naturally cocking a snow white constant it always was … believe ____ prophecy and alignment like an ancient alabaster Greek vase seven dwarfs but servants of Love black-holed desert date pip skin-pallet wrapped protected by Valley of Coconut Pitch milk flints microscopic within a still ditch beckoning majestic abyss hairs hint only voids birth perfected mirths when best of Earthly delights fall from Tree of Life as doves blight having tasted cherries of chivalry bite vistas of heath fields and lovers labelled hidden in armour or purple masks fabled rose mystic hat feathers fathom fast Black Hole Love slashes in bravery blast marbled Power Pearlescent cast ancient knowingness remembered the Real unfurls courageous unsevered Highest Alchemic Bower cheered breath it ~ exude it ~ become it _____________________
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Date: 7/19/2025 5:11:00 AM
first rate writing, enjoyed this one a lot - congrats on your win in the contest :)
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 7/19/2025 7:10:00 AM
ThkU for pop-in & comment Charlotte. I enjoyed yours too. Keep well. x.
Date: 7/18/2025 1:54:00 PM
Nice one, congrats.
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 7/18/2025 8:46:00 PM
THANKYOU for read, Maclawrence. Light from Africa to Africa. Xx.
Date: 7/17/2025 10:27:00 AM
An intense read! Congratulations! Xo
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 7/17/2025 4:12:00 PM
THANKYOU for read, Crystol. Congrats on your placement too. Xo.
Date: 7/16/2025 5:46:00 PM
I felt like I was endlessly spinning inside a black hole reading this dizzying but fantastic entry. Well done!
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 7/16/2025 9:43:00 PM
Merci for sponsorship & attention, Tom. Sending high frequencies. x.
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