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Crescent Smile

                                  crescent smile semblance                                                                   
                                 brother sun illumes the moon~
                                        a    at dusk hovers
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CayCay Jennings Date: 5/28/2025 2:40:00 AM Soup has broken out in artwork and when it's coherent, I wanna play, too, but I wish for more coloring options on my keyboard, like when I was 4 and wanted a larger box of crayons. Never have asterisks been more popular than they are on Soup now. I like your write even though you made me learn something ... CayCay Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 5/29/2025 7:42:00 PM Yes, it's best to keep one's head. If you manage to keep the brain as well, you're especially blessed. I Am Anaya Date: 5/28/2025 11:04:00 AM TY, Cay Cay. I'm learning along with you sweet poet~ They're quickies and it keeps you're head on homepage lol!

Paige Hind Date: 5/26/2025 10:20:00 PM Never quite heard it that way- "crescent smile semblance".... Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 5/28/2025 11:01:00 AM Oh, right it's my formula to use words I've never used before and express it into poems, (semantics) it's my style and I learn the word. I really want to learn how to use metaphors like your lovely poetry Paige ~ xhugs

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/25/2025 11:56:00 AM - This one was inventive with the text and moon shape... love it :) - Best wishes in the contest, Anaya :) - hugs Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 5/25/2025 2:16:00 PM Oh good! Ty Anne-Lise xhugs

Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/25/2025 10:30:00 AM WOW!!! What a creative Haiku write. Great/pretty picture. Love Both... Have a lovely/fun day writing away............... Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 5/25/2025 10:38:00 AM Sweet Paula, I get overjoyed when you visit! Ty, you as well~

Robert Warlov Date: 5/25/2025 7:52:00 AM strange how the secession of motion, puts it in motion. pretty cool. Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 5/25/2025 10:32:00 AM It's all sorts of cool Robert. Yes, my moon series has taught me that as earth, sister moon, and brother sun (which I had wrong in my haiku, fixed) is in motion, we maintain our equilibrium, God's grace. Nasa is cool.

Tom Woody Date: 5/24/2025 3:44:00 PM So creative. I'll have to try one of these sooner or later Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 5/24/2025 3:49:00 PM Never gave it much thought I Am Anaya Date: 5/24/2025 3:48:00 PM Join in on the hybrid haiku fun, Tommy. I've invested in the moon, haha. Like, I didn't know that crescent moon is only seen at dusk or dawn, did you?