“In the empire of desert, water is the king and shadow is the queen.” — Mehmet Murat Ildan, Turkish writer
For the Triolet Contrast Poetry Contest, sponsored by Hilo Poet
Intense thirst in the sweltering desert, yet, the emerald succulents still thrive; for surviving, often takes extra effort. Intense thirst in the sweltering desert; Then cool moon arrives, as if pressured. A beautiful, flowering cacti night, alive! Intense thirst in the sweltering desert, yet, the emerald succulents still thrive.
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